Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 2-10-2, Fables of Old Retold, has the syllables in the right place, but has a few things that detract from its success, I think. Labels is spelled wrong. The second line is profound, but needs more than this format of poem can provide. Tables?

Happy day.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019

Thanks for pointing that oversight out.
Tables - Meant as in a set of facts and figures systematically displayed especially in colums
All I could think of that was still rhythmic.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Any tale about old as and when retold, messages and tales are natural in the process, tables help if not labels; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019

Thank you for the review and encouragement.
God Bless

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This seems to say that we should forget about labels which really don't tell us who a person really is now. It is only a part of him/her built on the past and not the present or future.

Lable should be label.

Good luck and keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019

No matter what it is/about, it's spun to what speaker(s) feel, many subjects kept / to put away / saved for later .
God Bless you and your family
Thanks for the review

reply by dragonpoet on 25-Jan-2019

You're welcome. Have a good weekend.
dragonpoet