Ice Crackles
2-10-2 writing prompt3 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-10-2, Ice Crackles, has the syllables in the right place and sends out a warning to those who would walk on the ice. C sharp or B flat.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019
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This 2-10-2, Ice Crackles, has the syllables in the right place and sends out a warning to those who would walk on the ice. C sharp or B flat.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019
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Dear Bill,Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made effective use of every syllable in this well-written 2-10-2
poem that gives some great advice. That lovely snow may be concealing a
death trap!
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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You have made effective use of every syllable in this well-written 2-10-2
poem that gives some great advice. That lovely snow may be concealing a
death trap!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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Dear Janice, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from kahpot
Yes excellent advice and short poem, I like the way you have even rhymed the last two lines, very clever, with great artwork chosen for these words, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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Yes excellent advice and short poem, I like the way you have even rhymed the last two lines, very clever, with great artwork chosen for these words, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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Dear kahpot, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
