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Music

The right combination of sounds yields beauty

5 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 2-10-2, Music, has the syllables in the right place and defines the titular art form as '...sound arranged in time with care...' Nice

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
    I wish I were more musical myself. But fun to write about it. Thanks for the review.
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
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This is a beautiful contest entry!
Love your chosen artwork; it looks like it was created just for your poem.
I think the second line (10-syllable) was brilliant! You put so much thought into cutting down the definition of 'music'.
Awesome in all aspects :)
Gale

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
    Thanks for your read and your very kind comments. Much appreciated.
Comment from Ms. Snyder
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Beautiful contest entry for the 2-10-2 writing prompt - I think I have the same graphic without smoke from some image site - It looks really familiar to me. I liked how you described music - it is superb! Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
    Thank you so much for your read and review. Much appreciated.
Comment from victor 66
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I was really giving thought about writing a 2-10-2 syllable poem for this contest. And I though about writing about music. After reading yours, I can't see myself competing. So, I'm going to find another subject for my entry. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
    Sorry about that. There is lots to say about music. If you can't find another alternative give it a shot. Thanks for your read and your kind words.
reply by victor 66 on 25-Jan-2019
    Nothing to be sorry about. Every time you read another's writing, you can learn something. But I just didn't feel like competing at this time because I thought yours was good. you're welcome.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
    Thank you for your positive thoughts about my work.
Comment from Debra White
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Hi :)
I really like your poem - it is very well put together and speaks to my heart.
However (!) you only have 9 syllables in line 2 and you need 10.
Fix that and I believe you may have a winning entry!
Best wishes, Debra :)

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
    Thanks have edited:

    Beauty
    Colors of sound arranged in time with care
    Music
reply by Debra White on 24-Jan-2019
    Perfect :)
    Good luck in the booth!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
    Again, thanks for your help.