Yep...That Was Another Lifetime Ago
I remember watching the sun rise together...13 total reviews
Comment from pome lover
If that isn't the cutest picture. What bliss. an afternoon nap together.
that's a neat 1-6-1 poem.
Makes me smile.
By the way, congratulations on your win! good for you!
Katharin - pome lovet
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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If that isn't the cutest picture. What bliss. an afternoon nap together.
that's a neat 1-6-1 poem.
Makes me smile.
By the way, congratulations on your win! good for you!
Katharin - pome lovet
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Wow! :) Thanx for your wonderful comments, Katharine -- so good to hear from you! :) Be sure to stop by any time -- I'll reserve a place on the virtual front porch for you!! :) ;) Yvette
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I'd be delighted!
K
Comment from Carola Fernandez
Lovely writing piece...you captured so much in one sentence. That's the reality of life as years go by...Great picture that makes the poem complete. Congratulations!
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Lovely writing piece...you captured so much in one sentence. That's the reality of life as years go by...Great picture that makes the poem complete. Congratulations!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and your congratulatory wishes, Carola -- they are much appreciated! :) Have a wonderful remainder of the week! :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1, Yep, That Was Another Lifetime Ago, has the syllables in the right place and peeks in on our elders observing the joys of rest.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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This 1-6-1, Yep, That Was Another Lifetime Ago, has the syllables in the right place and peeks in on our elders observing the joys of rest.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Thank you, Bill! :) Yvette
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow, you are so impressive -- this is a wonderful 1-6-1! Didn't we all wait on dawn at one time or another when we were young and in love? What a great poem, filled with the sweet ambiance of youth.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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Wow, you are so impressive -- this is a wonderful 1-6-1! Didn't we all wait on dawn at one time or another when we were young and in love? What a great poem, filled with the sweet ambiance of youth.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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You know, flattery will get you everywhere - LOL! LOL! :) ;) I am so glad you enjoyed this one, Dawn -- I think the picture really helped it along! :) :) Thanx so much for your wonderful comments...especially that final one - you so get what I was trying to do there! :) Yvette :)
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a poignant portrayal of that photo. I think that I will dwell on the humor of your words and the photo. I bet you win this contest. I will go vote. This one is deserving. It's hard to be moving and humorous, but you did it.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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What a poignant portrayal of that photo. I think that I will dwell on the humor of your words and the photo. I bet you win this contest. I will go vote. This one is deserving. It's hard to be moving and humorous, but you did it.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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There's another author on here that we joke with each other about "Going through one another's closets" .... you are in my closet, aren't you, MQ? LOL! :) Well, don't worry...I'm going through yours first thing in the morning! :) ;) I'm signing off for the night right now though -- the teenagers wore me to a nub today! :) ;) LOL! Take care! :)
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Sleep tight
Comment from djeckert
This is so liovely. it says so much so efficiently. I love the picture and presentation. God surely blesses you. Its got my vote. " Gone are the times we'd wait on...its very lovely.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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This is so liovely. it says so much so efficiently. I love the picture and presentation. God surely blesses you. Its got my vote. " Gone are the times we'd wait on...its very lovely.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your review and wonderful comments - much appreciated! ;) Have a great week's end! ;)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 1-6-1 poem about lovers who come along more than one season and are still close and deeply in love with one another, nothing can seperate them while they are together.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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A very well-written 1-6-1 poem about lovers who come along more than one season and are still close and deeply in love with one another, nothing can seperate them while they are together.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the read and review, Sandra -- much appreciated! :) ;) Have a wonderful remainder of the week! :)
Comment from tfawcus
A bit of self-deprecating humour here, that will probably strike a chord with quite a few. It reminds me of my slightly different attitude to 'seethe New Year in' these days! Good luck with this one in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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A bit of self-deprecating humour here, that will probably strike a chord with quite a few. It reminds me of my slightly different attitude to 'seethe New Year in' these days! Good luck with this one in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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Thanx for your engaging comments, Tony -- always appreciate hearing from you! :) Have a wonderful remainder of the week! :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
The remember, today time gone for good watching the sunrise together and waiting on dawn, well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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The remember, today time gone for good watching the sunrise together and waiting on dawn, well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 24-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the read and review -- much appreciated! :) ;)
Comment from Ms. Snyder
This is a super sweet poem for the 1-6-1 contest. I enjoy photos of older couples. It reminds me of the possibilities. I like that this rhymed so well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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This is a super sweet poem for the 1-6-1 contest. I enjoy photos of older couples. It reminds me of the possibilities. I like that this rhymed so well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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Oh, Fonda - so glad you enjoyed! :) Thanx for dropping by -- you know I always love hearing from you!! ;) :)
