Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 1-6-1, Delightful Fries, has the syllables in the right place and declares the sad truth about where the taste and waist come together.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019

Thank you for continuing to read and review my posts. I really appreciate your taking the time. This was fun to write.
Have a great evening.
Brigitte

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

This poem has an amusing tongue-in-cheek humor. You will definitely draw the reader in. Burger King eater readers will smugly read this. MacDonald eater readers will be appalled. Your poem has done its job. It has gotten others to think. Well written.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019

Thank you so much for this complimentary review. It is difficult to spread a message in just a few syllables. I gave it a shot. I appreciate your time and kind words.

Blessings,
Anon

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

And then you have those fries that aren't quite as nice--the "foul fries", Anonymous Poet.
They not only wanna travel to your thighs but other places as well...

Heh-heh-heh...
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019

HAHAHA. This review should be in the contest, for sure. Thanks for reading and giving me a chuckle. The picture is hilarious. Laughed so hard I almost peed in my dainty underwear.

Laughing still,
Anon

reply by Dean Kuch on 24-Jan-2019

You always take a chance when posting animations like the one I've posted here. Ya just never know how it's going to be received on the other side.
You hope the ones you send them to have some sense of humor and realize you're just having a bit of lighthearted fun.
You're very welcome, I'm glad it made you laugh as intended.
Heaven knows, we get so few chances to do so these days it seems.
Good luck!
All my best...
~Dean ;-)))

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019

I think I have retained my sense of humor. Lately, smiles and laughter have been hard to come by, your review was a timely reminder of laughter that keeps you young and spirited.
Thanks for taking your time to read. By the way, the entry took second place.
Have a great day and keep those juices flowing...
:) Brigitte

reply by Dean Kuch on 25-Jan-2019

Hey, congratulations!
You try and do the same, Brigitte.
~Dean

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019

Thank you. Damn I wish I could add animations!
:)
Brigitte

reply by Dean Kuch on 25-Jan-2019

There's a club here, headed up by krys123 (Alex).
They'll teach ya' how to do it.
I added the link below just in case you're interested...
Utilizing Advanced Editor

~Dean

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019

I am, and thank you.
:)Brigitte

reply by Dean Kuch on 25-Jan-2019

Sure, no problem.
I'm a club member myself and I've learned a lot by participating.
Have a wonderful weekend.
~Dean

Comment from RodG

Excellent

Especially McDonald's fries and all that grease, but they are irresistible. Hence the "sighs." If I don't see them, I don't eat them, but the smell often does me in.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019

Thanks for reading this 1-6-1 post. I found this difficult because it had to rhyme.

I appreciate your time.

Anon

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

this very short poem is delightful. You have done a fine job with this, it is an outstanding example of 1-6-1 poetry. I wish you well in the contest..

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019

Thanks for reading this 1-6-1 post. I found this difficult because it had to rhyme. Glad you enjoyed reading it.

I appreciate your time.

Anon