The Sexy Thing
Sexy underwear is not always pleasant to wear.4 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 7-9-7, The Sexy Thing, has the syllables in the right place and employs the word, shivviness, so I now know how to explain these girls' problem.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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This 7-9-7, The Sexy Thing, has the syllables in the right place and employs the word, shivviness, so I now know how to explain these girls' problem.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Yes, sexy panties can be a pain in the butt.
Thanks for reading.
:)
Brigitte
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A hilarious entry for this obscure word 7-9-7 contest -- you've done a great job with your poem and your overall presentation!! :) Thank you so much for participating! :) Y.M. :)
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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A hilarious entry for this obscure word 7-9-7 contest -- you've done a great job with your poem and your overall presentation!! :) Thank you so much for participating! :) Y.M. :)
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Thank for liking this one. Sexy panties can be a pain in the butt, lol.
Thanks for reading.
Brigitte
Comment from Carola Fernandez
Very creative and funny entry for the obscure word. However, you may need to count the syllables again - line 1 - more than 7, line two - less than 9, line 3 - more than 7. You did a 9-7-9. Very funny picture perfect for your writing piece. Best of luck!
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
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Very creative and funny entry for the obscure word. However, you may need to count the syllables again - line 1 - more than 7, line two - less than 9, line 3 - more than 7. You did a 9-7-9. Very funny picture perfect for your writing piece. Best of luck!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
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Had it backwards! Tank you so very much, it has been edited, I believe it is correct now.
I appreciate helpful reviews such as this one. I am appreciative.
Blessings,
Brigitte
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You're welcome! I'm glad I was able to help and that you took my feedback as constructive and with such appreciation. Best of luck again. I will never forget your poem neither the picture. I had a good laugh. :)
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Thank you so much for the nomination. I am so honored!
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Thank you again. Constructive critiques are always welcome.
Brigitte
Comment from victor 66
When I was going to a Catholic elementary school back in the fifty's, I would on occasion make up words. Once using an imaginary word, a Sister/Nun stopped, thought for a few seconds... pointed her finger at me and said, "That's not a real word!" SHIVVINESS, although real, had I used it sixty years ago, I'm quite sure I would have gotten the same response. Good luck in the contests.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
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When I was going to a Catholic elementary school back in the fifty's, I would on occasion make up words. Once using an imaginary word, a Sister/Nun stopped, thought for a few seconds... pointed her finger at me and said, "That's not a real word!" SHIVVINESS, although real, had I used it sixty years ago, I'm quite sure I would have gotten the same response. Good luck in the contests.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the read. I am very familiar with Catholic school nun responses to words and deeds. I appreciate your kind review.
Blessings,
Brigitte
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You are most welcome, Brigitte.
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;)