Comment from Ulla

Excellent

So Now Charles is back in London, with some regret, and then this Sir David Brockenhurst turn up out of the blue. I wonder what his game is. I'll have to wait and see. I liked your play on boar and bore.
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All best. Ulla:))

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 Comment Written 20-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019

Thanks, Ulla. I posted this rather late at night and didn't proofread it quite as well as I should have. Thanks for the edit. All fixed now. Best wishes, Tony

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Tony,

So, why is this man - Sir Brockenhurst - going to be a problem?

I'm not entirely surprised Charles is having such a tough time with the bisexuality. Unfortunately, I've seen the reactions of husband and boyfriends of my friends over the years - men have very fragile egos.

'There is no turning back on the path of iron. One rushes through the landscape in madcap motion. borne by grappled and grinding wheels,... Did you mean for this to be a period and start a new sentence with 'Borne?' or did you mean for this to be a comma?

Looking forward to the next chapter - can't imagine what will happen now that he has a new traveling partner.

~patty~

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 Comment Written 20-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019

Thanks, Patty. I posted this rather late at night and didn't proofread it quite as well as I should have. Thanks for the edit. All fixed now. Best wishes, Tony