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Fairy Crown

flower 5-7-5

25 total reviews 
Comment from Donka Kristeva
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Beautiful. Carries the beauty of innocence and a child-like hope. I enjoyed the imagery and the simplicity or your words. A complete lovely write

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
    Thank you for this great review and your kind comments, Donka.
    I appreciate your
    feedback and response.
    Smiles,
    Karyn :-)
Comment from Boogienights
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This is a very creative take on this contest entry. Is this girl someone you know? Shes beautiful. I love this and I wish you well in the contest. I think you have an excellent chance.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
    Thank you for this great review and your kind comments, Boogienights.
    I appreciate your feedback and response. No, I don't know the girl in the photo.
    Smiles,
    Karyn :-)
Comment from kahpot
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What beautiful words to capture such a beautiful photo, the words give this girl the title of Flower Princess, very well presented 5-7-5 poem, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
    Thank you very much for your kind review and comments for my poem, kahpot.
    I appreciate your time to read and for sharing your thoughts.
    Smiles,
    Karyn :-)
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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OH...what a beautiful and creative way to address this writing prompt/contest. I love the "fairy crown/princess"... such a cute little flower girl. Your 5-7-5 is nicely formatted and a solid contest entry. I hope you do well.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
    Thank you, Cindy, for your kind review and comments for my poem. I appreciate your time to read and share your thoughtful response.
Comment from Spitfire
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Which came first? The photo or the poem? Nice use of assonance with white and entwined; crown and flower. Also alliteration with red roses and fairy flower.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
    Thank you for your kind review and comments for my poem, Shari. I appreciate your time to share your thoughts.
    The poem came first :-)
Comment from rhonnie69
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HELLO POET: I like your posting that you have posted here in that it is brief, and to the point.
This posting is alive. This is a vivid example of living color. It is an extremely interesting expression of colorful wit. Well done, Poet. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
    Thank you for your kind review and comments for my poem, rhonni. I appreciate your time to share your thoughts.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your lines read smoothly with good syllable count. The picture is a great pairing with your words. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
    I appreciate your time to read and write a review for my poem, Jan. Thank you for sharing your kind response.
Comment from Rickie1
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Cute. The picture makes that. "flower girl princess", doesn't give me the feel I get from the first two lines. This is wonderful, please don't take this a harsh. I am a feel and intuotion person.

Rickie

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
    I appreciate your time to read and write a review for my poem, Rickie. Thank you for sharing your comments and feedback.
Comment from June Sargent
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How sweet! A fairy crown fit for a princess for sure. Roses entwined like two lives at their wedding. Very romantic. Well done. Should stand out in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
    I appreciate your time to read and write a review for my poem, June . Thank you for sharing your kind response.
Comment from TPAC
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Indeed, seeing a very beautiful princess at that, feeling a slight change in its presented to enhance this view. Suggest: Roses white and read, not taking hopeful away from this write, but cutting a different view of the work. All in my opinion.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
    Thank you, TPAC, for your kind review, comments, and suggestion for my poem. I appreciate your feedback and response.