Buds
flower 5/7/53 total reviews
Comment from Carola Fernandez
Great 5-7-5 Haiku poem. Very nice selection of words that describe nature's events. The picture is excellent for your writing piece. Best of luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Great 5-7-5 Haiku poem. Very nice selection of words that describe nature's events. The picture is excellent for your writing piece. Best of luck with the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Thanks for reading and a most encouraging review zanya
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made effective use of every syllable in this lovely 5-7-5. I like
the way You have effectively conveyed how subtly spring starts inching up on winter.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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You have made effective use of every syllable in this lovely 5-7-5. I like
the way You have effectively conveyed how subtly spring starts inching up on winter.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Superb observation !zanya
Comment from Ms. Snyder
I absolutely adore Daffodils and think that any flower that can withstand the Ohio winters and still flower are the best flower of all, especially with the brutal snows and wind blasts that they get. This is a very nice 5-7-5! Good luck in the contest. I will be cheering you on. And a very cool pic. Cheers, Fonda
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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I absolutely adore Daffodils and think that any flower that can withstand the Ohio winters and still flower are the best flower of all, especially with the brutal snows and wind blasts that they get. This is a very nice 5-7-5! Good luck in the contest. I will be cheering you on. And a very cool pic. Cheers, Fonda
Comment Written 18-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya