Comment from meeshu

Excellent

Great descriptors. You captured a myriad of emotions herein (grief/sorrow/loss, joy, love). I felt drawn in from the first line. Best to you in 2019. ..............meeshu

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019

Great review zanya

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I enjoyed your tale here, albeit quite sad for a nine year old to lose their Mother, and to hear her Father cry, but life carries on and a miracle occurred as her Mother was watching over her, a bittersweet story, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019

Thanks for reading zanya

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

So had mom really died or not? My takeaway was the kid (you) hallucinated the whole thing and once the fever was gone everything was cool again. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019

Thanks for reading zanya