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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello and smiles rhonnie69
what fun I had reading your rhyming poem about Cinderella using it for a counting tool to keep track of how many times that one can jump over the rope.
Gert
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
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Hello and smiles rhonnie69
what fun I had reading your rhyming poem about Cinderella using it for a counting tool to keep track of how many times that one can jump over the rope.
Gert
Comment Written 18-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
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HELLO GERT: Since you are a girl I'm not surprised that you understood my poem. You got it exactly right. Thank you for viewing it and commenting on it. You appreciated. God bless. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Michele Harber
What an original idea, to tell your story through a jump-rope chant. It definitely displays the innocence of the game, and of the young girls who play it, engaging in their childhood fantasies of love while incorporating into them a count to facilitate the jump-rope rhythm. I like your follow-up comments as well, about how you found your sisters silly and annoying, yet always loved them.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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What an original idea, to tell your story through a jump-rope chant. It definitely displays the innocence of the game, and of the young girls who play it, engaging in their childhood fantasies of love while incorporating into them a count to facilitate the jump-rope rhythm. I like your follow-up comments as well, about how you found your sisters silly and annoying, yet always loved them.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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HELLO MICHELE: Thank you for viewing and complementing on my poem here. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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You're very welcome, and God bless you as well.
Comment from Earl Corp
That's a neat jumping rope song I never heard before. Since I'm a lot older I don't emember as many as I should but I'm positive I never heard that one. I can picture the kids jumping rope and hear the song in my head. Thanks for sharing. Nice job.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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That's a neat jumping rope song I never heard before. Since I'm a lot older I don't emember as many as I should but I'm positive I never heard that one. I can picture the kids jumping rope and hear the song in my head. Thanks for sharing. Nice job.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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HELLO EARL: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem here. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially" rhonnie69.