The Knock
Life is unpredictable.3 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
All those who aren't rich at one time wish to be. Maybe the third know is the charm and her dream will come true and that smile will return.
Good luck and keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
  |
All those who aren't rich at one time wish to be. Maybe the third know is the charm and her dream will come true and that smile will return.
Good luck and keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
-
Hi Joan. Thank you for reading my story. It is that time of year for Publishers Clearing to award a prize. My mailbox has been jammed with invitations.
Blessings,
Brigitte
-
So has mine along with my email too.b
You're welcome, Brigitte
Joan
-
;)
Comment from BigPoppaJrock
Great story with a twist, the early part was the hook and had me enticed. Interesting twist at the end leaving us with a glimmer of hope. Very modern and relevant topic, I believe the day is nearing for the Publisher's Clearing House winner to be announced.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
|
Great story with a twist, the early part was the hook and had me enticed. Interesting twist at the end leaving us with a glimmer of hope. Very modern and relevant topic, I believe the day is nearing for the Publisher's Clearing House winner to be announced.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
-
Thank you for reading my little story. Yes, it is that time of year and my mailbox has been filled with offers to participate, lol.
This was fun to write and hopefully and enjoyable read. The ending was an after thought, hope must spring eternally.
Have a great evening.
Brigitte
Comment from RodG
You do a wonderful job of setting the scene and using your camera to give us a close-up of Miranda. We see her smile and feel her anticipation--and then her disappointment. A great use of opening line as a refrain at the end to rebuild our hopes and hers. A nicely done short-short.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
|
You do a wonderful job of setting the scene and using your camera to give us a close-up of Miranda. We see her smile and feel her anticipation--and then her disappointment. A great use of opening line as a refrain at the end to rebuild our hopes and hers. A nicely done short-short.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
-
Thank you for reading my little story. Yes, it is that time of year and my mailbox has been filled with offers to participate, lol.
This was fun to write and hopefully and enjoyable read. The ending was an after thought, hope must spring eternally.
Have a great evening.
Brigitte
-
My pleasure. Good luck in the contest. Rod
