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Gift From The Heart

First in the Penny by the sea series.

5 total reviews 
Comment from pharp
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Boogienights,

Thanks for sharing with me the very first poem written about Penny Penelope Applebee. It is indeed a great motivational poem for children of all ages. I can see why it won first place. Have you published any of your poems? Keep writing my friend.

Hugs...Portia

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
    Thanks for reading. I would love to publish books for children, but so far I haven't. Have a lovely weekend.
Comment from Ms. Snyder
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Boogie this is a great poem, I am sorry I didn't see it earlier - I have been chasing a hamster wheel of inbox mail and reviews all week. Trying to get all the things I had planned for 2019 up and somethings didn't go as expected and so here I am behind with everyone's entries - this was a great story, lesson, and motto, I love it! Keep spreading the love - it's beautiful! Cheers, Fonda

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
    Thank you for taking time to read and review my poem, and for your kind words.
Comment from WryWriter
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Wish I had a six star. This rhyming poem is perfect for children. I even think adults would appreciate its happy theme and message of giving to others and the joy that giving can bring. Enjoyed!

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
    Thank you for such a nice review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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This is a really good kid's motivational poem. I think that what you have here goes so much further than a motivational poem. I see this as a children's book, or at least the beginning of a great one. You should look into this. I like everything about this well written poem. The rhyme and flow of this is superb. Very well done!

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
    Thank you so much. I love writing for children, I find it so much fun. I'm writing a series now called Robert's Adventures. I would be honored if you checked them out. Thanks again.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks how mother, even neighbour offer gifts to their kid Penny every morning and motivate her living joyfully and playfully; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
    Once again, thank you for taking time to read and review my poem.