Spring Days
Flash fiction 50 words3 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This fifty-word story, Spring Days, falls into the word restriction and creates a mystery. Did Joe hear the bird's last chirp, or put a shovel up side its head?
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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This fifty-word story, Spring Days, falls into the word restriction and creates a mystery. Did Joe hear the bird's last chirp, or put a shovel up side its head?
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from kiwijenny
This is great. I remember seeing yellow hammers when we lived in Alabama. It's that State's bird. I like the economical story in just 50 words...and Mother Nature donning her Mourning dress. I guess Mourning doves were invited.lol
God bless
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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This is great. I remember seeing yellow hammers when we lived in Alabama. It's that State's bird. I like the economical story in just 50 words...and Mother Nature donning her Mourning dress. I guess Mourning doves were invited.lol
God bless
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Great -thanks for reading zanya
Comment from meeshu
You have created some great images here, and your writing is thoughtful and descriptive, this is a very fine piece of prose. good luck..
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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You have created some great images here, and your writing is thoughtful and descriptive, this is a very fine piece of prose. good luck..
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Thanks for those encouraging words zanya
