essence of him
a short poem6 total reviews
Comment from Connie Frazier
So much sadness in such a short poem. It's amazing how you captured so much in just a few lines. I think the commas at the end of the 2nd and 3rd lines work well here. Very nice work.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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So much sadness in such a short poem. It's amazing how you captured so much in just a few lines. I think the commas at the end of the 2nd and 3rd lines work well here. Very nice work.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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Thanks for the review. Must be sad to find personal belongings of someone that has passed, the memories rush back. Have a great week end, cheers, j
Comment from BeasPeas
This is so lovely. Thank you for sharing. It will be one year this Wednesday since my husband passed away. In a few brief lines you've caught the emotion of the loss. Marilyn
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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This is so lovely. Thank you for sharing. It will be one year this Wednesday since my husband passed away. In a few brief lines you've caught the emotion of the loss. Marilyn
Comment Written 13-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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Sorry to hear that. Finding little reminders must be hard as the memories rush back. Have a wonderful weekend, cheers, j
Comment from angel123
Your poem flows well with feeling. I enjoyed reading it. It rhymes well and your message is straight to the point and meaningful. I like your artwork choice. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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Your poem flows well with feeling. I enjoyed reading it. It rhymes well and your message is straight to the point and meaningful. I like your artwork choice. Best wishes!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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Thanks for the insightful review, cheers, j
Comment from Graybærd
Fourteen words that say so much more. Wanting to be with him so much that you keep his jacket nearby so as to remember him.
Well done with this. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Fourteen words that say so much more. Wanting to be with him so much that you keep his jacket nearby so as to remember him.
Well done with this. Best of luck.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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The kid hung it on the chair before he died and they just left it thete. Thanks for the review. Cheers, judester
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
Hi, I would love to give a higher rate because the poem is a good one; however you are one word short of the required 15 words mark.
I will be happy review again.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Hi, I would love to give a higher rate because the poem is a good one; however you are one word short of the required 15 words mark.
I will be happy review again.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thanks for the review. Actually, the prompt said 15 words or less. Cheers, judester
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OK...it says not more than 15 so the interoretation is the same. I was going to give you 4 stars but decided to give you the intended 5. So it works out.
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Cheers.
Comment from Bill Schott
This short poem, Essence of Him, defines a length of time when the item treasured as a touchstone to memory becomes a simple coat, no longer possessed by the scent of life.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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This short poem, Essence of Him, defines a length of time when the item treasured as a touchstone to memory becomes a simple coat, no longer possessed by the scent of life.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thanks for the review Bill.exactly. cheers, j
