Yummy, HOT Oatmeal Raisin Cookies
How to get a party of little boys to drink their milk...9 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This humorous 5-7-5, Yummy Hot Oatmeal Raisin Cookies, has the correct format and gives an example of mindless eating. Cookies!!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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This humorous 5-7-5, Yummy Hot Oatmeal Raisin Cookies, has the correct format and gives an example of mindless eating. Cookies!!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Thanx so much for the review,Bill -- enjoy some cookies this week! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from Mark D. R.
Oh yea, one 'gots' to read the recipe more carefully or look before you grab that McCormick spice container without your specs on!
Cute picture accompanies you contest verse - excellent.
best wishes to you in this writing promot contest
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Oh yea, one 'gots' to read the recipe more carefully or look before you grab that McCormick spice container without your specs on!
Cute picture accompanies you contest verse - excellent.
best wishes to you in this writing promot contest
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
OH no!!! Those red-lidded McCormick bottles do all look alike. :) I laughed at your author's notes...they still ate them. Your topic is great for a humorous 5-7-5. I hope you wear your glasses in the kitchen. :) Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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OH no!!! Those red-lidded McCormick bottles do all look alike. :) I laughed at your author's notes...they still ate them. Your topic is great for a humorous 5-7-5. I hope you wear your glasses in the kitchen. :) Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from kiwijenny
That's boys for you...a friend baked a cake for my friend knowing she had company...us. We heard the call. DON'T EAT THE CAKE DON'T EAT THE CAKE....BAKING SODA instead of icing sugar...yuck but we all tried it...it was very Adm and Eve
God bless
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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That's boys for you...a friend baked a cake for my friend knowing she had company...us. We heard the call. DON'T EAT THE CAKE DON'T EAT THE CAKE....BAKING SODA instead of icing sugar...yuck but we all tried it...it was very Adm and Eve
God bless
Comment Written 11-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from AdaJulie
Oh I love this! you are a wonderful writer. So few words tell a a complete story! Sometimes us moms take great measures to get boys to drink their milk; brilliant,! great job
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Oh I love this! you are a wonderful writer. So few words tell a a complete story! Sometimes us moms take great measures to get boys to drink their milk; brilliant,! great job
Comment Written 11-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Carola Fernandez
Funny! Good idea! It seems that you had fun writing your poem. It's leaving me with a smile! This situation can certainly happen when ingredients look almost the same and one does not read the labels. Has that happened to you or you just created the lines? Yummy picture!
Best of luck!
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Funny! Good idea! It seems that you had fun writing your poem. It's leaving me with a smile! This situation can certainly happen when ingredients look almost the same and one does not read the labels. Has that happened to you or you just created the lines? Yummy picture!
Best of luck!
Comment Written 11-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Graybærd
Spicy raisins.
Not the first 5-7-5 based on a cooking disaster, and oatmeal cookies?! My favorite!
Don't worry. Still top notch, so I'll give it to ya.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Spicy raisins.
Not the first 5-7-5 based on a cooking disaster, and oatmeal cookies?! My favorite!
Don't worry. Still top notch, so I'll give it to ya.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Marc Grimaldi
Great short funny poem! And that would probably get the boys to drink their milk! On a side note, this was prefaced with a warning about potential violence or something. Just wanted to let you know, in case you accidentally hit that setting. Keep up the good writing!
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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Great short funny poem! And that would probably get the boys to drink their milk! On a side note, this was prefaced with a warning about potential violence or something. Just wanted to let you know, in case you accidentally hit that setting. Keep up the good writing!
Comment Written 11-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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Whoa ... I checked and it doesn't show up on my 'author view'....I went in anyway to edit and, even though it already had no, i entered 'no' again for the violence and the other two things....let me know if that warning is still there....thanx! :) And thanx for the read and review - always appreciated! ;) Take care, Marc! :)
Comment from TheStoryMan
LOL This is truly a funny poem even funnier is the boys not complaining and continuing to eat the cookies. I don't think that would be the case in my house...my kids would refuse to eat the cookies and demand a new batch.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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LOL This is truly a funny poem even funnier is the boys not complaining and continuing to eat the cookies. I don't think that would be the case in my house...my kids would refuse to eat the cookies and demand a new batch.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your review.