The Fear in His Eyes
Humorous 5-7-5 contest entry5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This humorous 5-7-5, The Fear in His Eyes, has the correct format and misinterprets the cats hearing with an olfactory assault.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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This humorous 5-7-5, The Fear in His Eyes, has the correct format and misinterprets the cats hearing with an olfactory assault.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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I appreciate the great review and generous stars, Bill . Thank you.
Comment from Six-Star Writer
Yes, but in all fairness to your cat, some farts do seem as though they are signal the earth's end. It sounds as though they are heaven's trumpets. So maybe your cat does feel the world is coming to an end when you pass gas.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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Yes, but in all fairness to your cat, some farts do seem as though they are signal the earth's end. It sounds as though they are heaven's trumpets. So maybe your cat does feel the world is coming to an end when you pass gas.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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Lol. Yes, at time they're loud enough to make my wife think the world's ending. Haha. Thank you for the great review, BP. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Ron
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You, too, DS.
Comment from zlp22
Cats seem to be afraid of everything. Great picture and good word flow. Good luck in the contest. I like short poems because they say more and get to the point.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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Cats seem to be afraid of everything. Great picture and good word flow. Good luck in the contest. I like short poems because they say more and get to the point.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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Thank you, Zip.
Comment from victor 66
I don't know of any other creature that has such fascinating and humous expressions as that of a cat. I wish you luck in the contest. A side note: have you ever wondered that while they have bred some breed of dogs so huge that they weigh well over three hundred pounds. Yet, they don't breed house cats to weigh any where near a hundred pounds?
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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I don't know of any other creature that has such fascinating and humous expressions as that of a cat. I wish you luck in the contest. A side note: have you ever wondered that while they have bred some breed of dogs so huge that they weigh well over three hundred pounds. Yet, they don't breed house cats to weigh any where near a hundred pounds?
Comment Written 11-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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Haha, yeah, that would be a sight. Thank you for the great review and good luck wishes, Victor. Have a great weekend.
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You are most welcome. My thought is, if you had a hundred pound plus cat, I'd be most cautious. Do you think it would treat us much different than a mouse, if it was that large?
Comment from Pat Fleming
Absolutely hysterical, my cat is exactly the same way. My cat will literally jump at the littlest noise. What a great use of this form of poetry too. Thank you for this, your really made me laugh. In fact, my cat is giving me that strange look now cause I woke him us with my laughter.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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Absolutely hysterical, my cat is exactly the same way. My cat will literally jump at the littlest noise. What a great use of this form of poetry too. Thank you for this, your really made me laugh. In fact, my cat is giving me that strange look now cause I woke him us with my laughter.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Pat. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece. Have a great weekend.
