On Ashland Avenue
Remebering the first place I lived.5 total reviews
Comment from Artasylum
It is so nice to be able to see that you were able to get intouch with the innocent side of yourself and tell a story from the child in you... great job and looking forward. yours, diana
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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It is so nice to be able to see that you were able to get intouch with the innocent side of yourself and tell a story from the child in you... great job and looking forward. yours, diana
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Jaye Bennett
I still like lace curtains. This is quite a story. What amazing memories, especially the baking bread. I worked across the street from a bakery. They started frying donuts about 4 p.m. This was before air conditioning, so you can imagine the effect of frying donuts on tummies getting ready for their evening meal. Watching the sky, clouds, night birds. Wow. Nice. Good job.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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I still like lace curtains. This is quite a story. What amazing memories, especially the baking bread. I worked across the street from a bakery. They started frying donuts about 4 p.m. This was before air conditioning, so you can imagine the effect of frying donuts on tummies getting ready for their evening meal. Watching the sky, clouds, night birds. Wow. Nice. Good job.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thanks much for the read and the encouraging words.
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Everyone has some bad in their lives. You must have had a preponderance of good in yours to have had what seems to be such pleasant memories.
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I have been lucky for the most part.
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Ability helps, but luck is good.
Comment from zanya
Sounds absolutely idyllic - a feast for practically all of the senses in that childhood home - and sleeping under the stars to booth ! - well portrayed - nice pic
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Sounds absolutely idyllic - a feast for practically all of the senses in that childhood home - and sleeping under the stars to booth ! - well portrayed - nice pic
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thanks much for the read and the encouraging words.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer,
How I wish I had six stars for this memorable childhood poem! I was with you from the very start. Keen visual imagery that gave way to equally keen emotive imagery. I wouldn't trade those memories, either, if they were mine. Beautiful rendering!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Hello Mystery Writer,
How I wish I had six stars for this memorable childhood poem! I was with you from the very start. Keen visual imagery that gave way to equally keen emotive imagery. I wouldn't trade those memories, either, if they were mine. Beautiful rendering!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much for the read and the encouraging comments.
Comment from Six-Star Writer
You painted a very vivid and wonderful place for a child to live. Smelling fresh bread each morning. What a pleasant scent to wake up to. The rollway beds on the porch and the open sky to view at night. It must have been like camping all summer.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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You painted a very vivid and wonderful place for a child to live. Smelling fresh bread each morning. What a pleasant scent to wake up to. The rollway beds on the porch and the open sky to view at night. It must have been like camping all summer.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the read and the comments. It was a special time out on the back deck for sure.
