Hedwig
Bye bye blackbird 5/7/53 total reviews
Comment from Six-Star Writer
Yes, and he's a great Hogwart's postal worker. He seemed pretty friendly, too. I'm sure he was very smart and kind. My kind of bird. And who doesn't like owls?
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Yes, and he's a great Hogwart's postal worker. He seemed pretty friendly, too. I'm sure he was very smart and kind. My kind of bird. And who doesn't like owls?
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Jaye Bennett
Hedwig is beautiful. Perfect picture for this poem. I like the alliterations in the first line. Yes. Hedwig helps the snowy owl to linger. What a postal carrier. The 5-7-5 is done well. It should do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Hedwig is beautiful. Perfect picture for this poem. I like the alliterations in the first line. Yes. Hedwig helps the snowy owl to linger. What a postal carrier. The 5-7-5 is done well. It should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Marc Grimaldi
It was sad when Hedwig was struck dead in the Harry Potter series. But, as you said, the beautiful snowy owl definitely brought our attention to the beauty of such creatures. For a 5-7-5, limited to animal topic, this was very good. Keep up the good writing!
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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It was sad when Hedwig was struck dead in the Harry Potter series. But, as you said, the beautiful snowy owl definitely brought our attention to the beauty of such creatures. For a 5-7-5, limited to animal topic, this was very good. Keep up the good writing!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thanks for those words of encouragement zanya