Comment from Jaye Bennett

Excellent

We have a pair of wrens who have returned to us. They are feisty little creatures who sing like angels. So tiny, the hole in the birdbox is the size of a quarter. Good job.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019

Thanks much for your read and your comments. Hope the birds keep coming back for you.

reply by Jaye Bennett on 09-Jan-2019

I hope they do, too.

Comment from Six-Star Writer

Excellent

They are industrious little birds. I like their complex nests. Yes, truly birds of the Napolianic ilk. Foragers who forage ahead full steam. And not a bad bird on the eyes.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019

Yes, they are and I like the variety in their songs. Thanks for the read and the comments.

reply by Six-Star Writer on 09-Jan-2019

Comment from Sam Saylor

Excellent

My imagination is whipped away to the land of birds and the battle of the birds! I like the use of the word trill and threatening in the same sentence. I believe the last line could have more punch like the two above however that said I appreciate that may be a little difficult given the nature of 5-7-5

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019

Thanks for the read and the suggestion. I will think about a more punch-laden last line.

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

Sweet little guy with a gangsta' attitude... protect the territory that stature actually protects through his song.. Thanks so much and good luck in the bird contest. yours, diana

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019

Thanks for the read. I like the specification of a gangsta' attitude. I may incorporate.