I've Arrived
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Comment from William Ross
This is great written really well, Great rhyming and wonderful meter, reads and flows very good.I remember the first time with a rose bush. Good luck and have great day
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This is great written really well, Great rhyming and wonderful meter, reads and flows very good.I remember the first time with a rose bush. Good luck and have great day
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
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thanks for your review and your sage thoughts and observations... yours diana
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was a long time ago. Life isn't half as much fun for youngsters of today. I enjoyed your lovely poem, I was a tomboy too, good days weren't they? I think you've written a really good contest entry, it certainly brought back many memories for me. Well done and good luck! :)) Sandra xx
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That was a long time ago. Life isn't half as much fun for youngsters of today. I enjoyed your lovely poem, I was a tomboy too, good days weren't they? I think you've written a really good contest entry, it certainly brought back many memories for me. Well done and good luck! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
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thanks for your review and your sage thoughts and observations... yours diana
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, the wonders of new and different things to explore, while the pain of some of it we discovered later in life, a wonderful poem that reads and flows very well, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Excellent, the wonders of new and different things to explore, while the pain of some of it we discovered later in life, a wonderful poem that reads and flows very well, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
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thanks for your review and your sage thoughts and observations... yours diana
Comment from Miss Sherry
There is nothing like the curiosity and joy of a child. This is such a sweet write. I have seen children wanting to touch and explore this way. The artwork is adorable. You have done a fine job of entertaining us.
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There is nothing like the curiosity and joy of a child. This is such a sweet write. I have seen children wanting to touch and explore this way. The artwork is adorable. You have done a fine job of entertaining us.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
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thanks for your review and your sage thoughts and observations... yours diana
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My pleasure!!
Comment from dragonpoet
This does remind me of being young. Everything was so exiting and new. I like the way the second lines of succeeding couplets rhyme. Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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This does remind me of being young. Everything was so exiting and new. I like the way the second lines of succeeding couplets rhyme. Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
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thanks for your review and your sage thoughts and observations... yours diana
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No problem, Diana
Joan
Comment from Spitfire
A fantastic opening where a single word and a phrase tells us you're talking about a toddler.: waddled and "this side of brand new" The last line wowed me with its universal message. Most impressive.
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A fantastic opening where a single word and a phrase tells us you're talking about a toddler.: waddled and "this side of brand new" The last line wowed me with its universal message. Most impressive.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
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Hey Spitfire... thanks so, so much for reading and blanketing me with stars... also thanks for your review and your sage thoughts and observations... yours diana
Comment from Janet Foor
A sweet picture to compliment your poem about When Life Was Still Fun.
Thank you for sharing this lovely piece with a moral to the story as well.
Blessings
Janet
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A sweet picture to compliment your poem about When Life Was Still Fun.
Thank you for sharing this lovely piece with a moral to the story as well.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
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thanks for your review and your sage thoughts and observations... yours diana
Comment from akey
A very sweet poem about the new morning thru the child' eyes.
This made me think of my grandmother ( Nanny) her yard was always beautiful.
The rhyming was perfect. I did not get "were such a quick retreat" until I reread it.
Great job and I loved the picture.
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A very sweet poem about the new morning thru the child' eyes.
This made me think of my grandmother ( Nanny) her yard was always beautiful.
The rhyming was perfect. I did not get "were such a quick retreat" until I reread it.
Great job and I loved the picture.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
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Comment from royowen
An excellent work in non-rhyming couplets. The message ofbthevwork is subtle, but year still clear. I always made sure my kids enjoyed their childhood, that the "thorns of life" came when they could handle them, and, although it's a guessing game, a haven for little ones is always important. Beautifully written in great language, good luck, blessings, Roy
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An excellent work in non-rhyming couplets. The message ofbthevwork is subtle, but year still clear. I always made sure my kids enjoyed their childhood, that the "thorns of life" came when they could handle them, and, although it's a guessing game, a haven for little ones is always important. Beautifully written in great language, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
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thanks for your review and your sage thoughts and observations... yours diana
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Well done
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, I've Arrived, finds the young explorer dodging a bullet as her hand full of thorns was postponed until some later introduction. Nice.
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This poem, I've Arrived, finds the young explorer dodging a bullet as her hand full of thorns was postponed until some later introduction. Nice.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
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thanks for your review and your sage thoughts and observations... yours diana
