Of Sea, Earth and Sky
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Avian Artwork"A collection of poems written in 5-7-5 format.
4 total reviews
Comment from Jaye Bennett
The peacock proudly struts to gain the peahen as a mate. Well structured 5-7-5 poem. You have added a fabulous picture of a peacock, even if he isn't strutting. Good job.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
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The peacock proudly struts to gain the peahen as a mate. Well structured 5-7-5 poem. You have added a fabulous picture of a peacock, even if he isn't strutting. Good job.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
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Thank you so very much for the stars and the review!
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You did a good job.
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Thank you. I so much appreciate your kind words of encouragement.
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I think the peacock's job is simple to be beautiful. I know they used to be used as watch-birds for the temples. They would wander around and scream at intruders.
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That is something I did not know. Thank you for sharing!
Comment from Six-Star Writer
I love "feathered canvas." I always associate peacocks with NBC and the loud noises they make at the zoo. They certainly make their presence known--both in sound and winged display.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
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I love "feathered canvas." I always associate peacocks with NBC and the loud noises they make at the zoo. They certainly make their presence known--both in sound and winged display.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
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Growing up my friends had one on their dairy farm. They used to collect, then display lost tail feathers from it. Anyway, I thank you most kindly for all the stars and your review.
Comment from melodymavic
Wow, I like this poem. Reminds me an artist can create anything thru their imagination and action. The Peacock symbolise beauty and domination. The Artist want represent that they want to be big like frontline in showbiz. A person who stands out in their outfit, color or in their own way.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
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Wow, I like this poem. Reminds me an artist can create anything thru their imagination and action. The Peacock symbolise beauty and domination. The Artist want represent that they want to be big like frontline in showbiz. A person who stands out in their outfit, color or in their own way.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
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Thank you. I'm glad you like it. I really appreciate all the stars and your kind review!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Good job with the syllable count per line. Your words flow smoothly with a good 'message.' Your picture you paired with your words is perfect and beautiful, too. Good job and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Good job with the syllable count per line. Your words flow smoothly with a good 'message.' Your picture you paired with your words is perfect and beautiful, too. Good job and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 08-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
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Thank you. I am grateful for the stars, the review and the wishes.