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Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a charming write and one I am certain children will love, especially the smooth rhyme and a theme with which they can easily relate - the entire construct and presentation was perfect in its easy read...
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In my opinion, a charming write and one I am certain children will love, especially the smooth rhyme and a theme with which they can easily relate - the entire construct and presentation was perfect in its easy read...
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
Comment from Ms. Snyder
I'm going to give you five stars because over all it is a good poem. There may some polishing on this poem especially in your last few lines. For the most part you have couplets. If you would like to discuss what I saw let me know. It might just be the spacing issue in the mobile app with your last line. Cheers, Fonda
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I'm going to give you five stars because over all it is a good poem. There may some polishing on this poem especially in your last few lines. For the most part you have couplets. If you would like to discuss what I saw let me know. It might just be the spacing issue in the mobile app with your last line. Cheers, Fonda
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019