Jesus Christ is Always There
No matter where you are Jesus is already there.2 total reviews
Comment from Pat Fleming
Your sweet poem is so simplistic and straight forward in it's message. No matter where we are in life, good times, bad times, Jesus is there with us. We are never alone. What a comforting feeling to have inside. I see Jesus and goodness as uncomplicated, very simple and believing in Jesus and is goodness can make our lives so much simpler. We don't ever have to feel alone, or afraid, lost, worried, because we are not carrying all on our own shoulders, in fact Jesus is carrying that weight for us. This is a very lovely work and even the quick, rhythmic flow of your words, displays the simple tone of your message to your reader. I really like this and am grateful to you for reminding me of something that sometimes when I get lost in the rough, heaviness of life, I forget. That is to just let go and remember Jesus is sitting right with me. Thank you so much
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Your sweet poem is so simplistic and straight forward in it's message. No matter where we are in life, good times, bad times, Jesus is there with us. We are never alone. What a comforting feeling to have inside. I see Jesus and goodness as uncomplicated, very simple and believing in Jesus and is goodness can make our lives so much simpler. We don't ever have to feel alone, or afraid, lost, worried, because we are not carrying all on our own shoulders, in fact Jesus is carrying that weight for us. This is a very lovely work and even the quick, rhythmic flow of your words, displays the simple tone of your message to your reader. I really like this and am grateful to you for reminding me of something that sometimes when I get lost in the rough, heaviness of life, I forget. That is to just let go and remember Jesus is sitting right with me. Thank you so much
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Thank you. I truly do appreciate the stars and you're review!
Comment from meeshu
I like this for its form, rote style with repeating line and singular rhyme. and of course the message is universally strong. good luck in the contest..
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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I like this for its form, rote style with repeating line and singular rhyme. and of course the message is universally strong. good luck in the contest..
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Thank you, meeshu, for the wonderful stars and your review. Both greatly appreciated!
