Kill the Frogs
Faith dies, arrogance prospers, and the world will die3 total reviews
Comment from padumachitta
Hi..yes, I knowthisis an old post. But, I wanted to read something of yours. And his one appealed to me.
I know it is supposed to be fiction. But, it is, to me, not far off from much of what is happening. Ah, the top 1 percent. People scarey numbers.
This is good. This should be sent off. There are short story mags that would take this. The frogs, the frogs are a chilling touch.
And this was written before the horror of Covid...
thanks padumachitta
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Hi..yes, I knowthisis an old post. But, I wanted to read something of yours. And his one appealed to me.
I know it is supposed to be fiction. But, it is, to me, not far off from much of what is happening. Ah, the top 1 percent. People scarey numbers.
This is good. This should be sent off. There are short story mags that would take this. The frogs, the frogs are a chilling touch.
And this was written before the horror of Covid...
thanks padumachitta
Comment Written 17-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Thank you, padumachitta
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Hey...I am serious, you need to try and send this off to one of the flash fiction mags...
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My networking does not go in that direction. I have written three books, all westerns. So I would not know where to go with this story. Thank you, I wish you the best during this holiday season.
Comment from Luvs2rite4u
Oh my! Where should I start? Well, I will tell you this, your story was fantastic. Me, as the reader felt the chills, and labored breathing while reading this story. I have to tell you..It's true as you seem to already know. I too am a runner. The use of colorful wording captured the reader into not a story..yet Immersed into your soul. The only thing you will need to fix is spelling error. Bilderbergs. I hope you win this contest. If there were more stars it would have gone higher. Your intuition and style was awesome. Loved it. Luvs.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Oh my! Where should I start? Well, I will tell you this, your story was fantastic. Me, as the reader felt the chills, and labored breathing while reading this story. I have to tell you..It's true as you seem to already know. I too am a runner. The use of colorful wording captured the reader into not a story..yet Immersed into your soul. The only thing you will need to fix is spelling error. Bilderbergs. I hope you win this contest. If there were more stars it would have gone higher. Your intuition and style was awesome. Loved it. Luvs.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much for your review. There is much more that could have been said in this story, but it would be pointless. After all, this is only fiction..., RIGHT.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Food for thought and I liked the frog analogy, we are manipulated by the media every day and the truth is sometimes not revealed until we have all swallowed the pill and believe, then we find out the injustices in the system I enjoyed your write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Food for thought and I liked the frog analogy, we are manipulated by the media every day and the truth is sometimes not revealed until we have all swallowed the pill and believe, then we find out the injustices in the system I enjoyed your write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much for your review, it's important to me. I am glad you enjoyed it.
