Comment from Kelly Grim

Exceptional

Everything about this is beautiful! I felt those anxious minutes. I love how you've arranged this! Stunning imagery throughout! I love the first line and the third line too! Just so good! Beautiful presentation too! This gets my vote! Great job!

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019

Thanks for the encouraging review and sparkly stars Kelly. I can only imagine the anxiety in that situation. Hah.cheers.

Comment from Mimi Linny

Excellent

Nervous and anxious he must be! And as, in turn, seems so is she! Very cute and adorable piece on the anxious groom (and his bride). Loved the rhyme! Great job and much luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019

Thanks for the insightful review. Yeah, phew.Cheers, judester

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello!
Kudos! What a well-crafted 20 word/five line poem that had a happy ending! The groom is definitely characterized as being anxious, and the visual imagery you have presented is keen. Thank goodness his bride appeared...perhaps! :)

Best Wishes,
diane

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019

Thanks for the encouraging review.Cheers, judester