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Comment from Joan E.
You certainly wove the required words seamlessly into your poem, and I hope it was well received in the contest. I admired your challenging yourself to create the piece in rhymed couplets. Thanks for adding your sense of humor as well--I'm still chortling! -Joan
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019
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You certainly wove the required words seamlessly into your poem, and I hope it was well received in the contest. I admired your challenging yourself to create the piece in rhymed couplets. Thanks for adding your sense of humor as well--I'm still chortling! -Joan
Comment Written 18-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019
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Thank you, i actually took second place with this entry. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
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Congratulations on the second place and keep up the good work- Joan
Comment from jeSSaNN
Lol! ... How cute!?!...
It's so great to be able to not take ourselves so seriously all the time, isn't it!?.. that's the beauty of being free!
Well done! I enjoyed reading this. Thanks
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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Lol! ... How cute!?!...
It's so great to be able to not take ourselves so seriously all the time, isn't it!?.. that's the beauty of being free!
Well done! I enjoyed reading this. Thanks
Comment Written 07-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much for your kind words.This was a fun write. I appreciate ypou taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from tfawcus
When in doubt, a bit of scatalogical humour usually works. I don't think we ever quite grow out of it. That, together with your slightly tortured rhyme pairs, makes this an entertaining piece.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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When in doubt, a bit of scatalogical humour usually works. I don't think we ever quite grow out of it. That, together with your slightly tortured rhyme pairs, makes this an entertaining piece.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much for your kind words.This was a fun write. I appreciate ypou taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from kiwijenny
Ha ha ha ...I think this is awesome...you used lilac fir and dipper and it all made sense. I've used an outhouse. My grandparents had one...they had sandpaper in there to sand the seat so you didn't get splinters.LOL...I told them I put off peeing or pooping until the last possible moment ..there was no time for sanding ...I was bouncing from foot to foot. And we called it the long drop in New Zealand...the deeper the hole dug the longer it took to sound the better...
God bless and hugs...thanks for the memories ...ha ha ha
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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Ha ha ha ...I think this is awesome...you used lilac fir and dipper and it all made sense. I've used an outhouse. My grandparents had one...they had sandpaper in there to sand the seat so you didn't get splinters.LOL...I told them I put off peeing or pooping until the last possible moment ..there was no time for sanding ...I was bouncing from foot to foot. And we called it the long drop in New Zealand...the deeper the hole dug the longer it took to sound the better...
God bless and hugs...thanks for the memories ...ha ha ha
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much for your kind words and the six star rating, I am truly honored .This was a fun write. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from krys123
Cheers, Contestant;
>What is very well written story within a utilizing the word specified by the contest entry.
> I was captivated and how you are going to present the words you think I'm so gracefully that it they said in so well and added to the story.
>Good luck in the contest and take care and have a good one especially because you deserve it.
Alx
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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Cheers, Contestant;
>What is very well written story within a utilizing the word specified by the contest entry.
> I was captivated and how you are going to present the words you think I'm so gracefully that it they said in so well and added to the story.
>Good luck in the contest and take care and have a good one especially because you deserve it.
Alx
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much for your kind words.This was a fun write. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
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You're very welcome, Earl.
Alx
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Oh, my gosh! What a delightful and humorous poem :)
Love the photo of the outhouse.
I think you did an excellent job!
Love your rhyme;
Am glad you typed the required words using bold font.
This is a great contest entry!
Gale
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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Oh, my gosh! What a delightful and humorous poem :)
Love the photo of the outhouse.
I think you did an excellent job!
Love your rhyme;
Am glad you typed the required words using bold font.
This is a great contest entry!
Gale
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much for your kind words Gale.This was a fun write. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very cute and funny little poem with excellent rhyme and flow. It made me chuckle.I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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This is a very cute and funny little poem with excellent rhyme and flow. It made me chuckle.I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much for your kind words Jen .This was a fun write. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from phil nelson
Well you certainly combined all the requisite words into a humorous tongue in cheek poem --most enjoyable to read ---your meter of course was crazy, but you kept faithful to your story, particularly in the short time allowed --very well done--good luck in the contest!
All the Best!
phil
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Well you certainly combined all the requisite words into a humorous tongue in cheek poem --most enjoyable to read ---your meter of course was crazy, but you kept faithful to your story, particularly in the short time allowed --very well done--good luck in the contest!
All the Best!
phil
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much Phil. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO POET: If I didn't, "KNOW," that you wrote this...I would imagine that I wrote it. In other words what I mean is that I can relate to this because: "I have been here, and I have done this before. It was a long time ago...but nonetheless...I have actually experienced living like this. At the time I was just a kid...and this was all that I knew. So I thought that this was my life...and it was what I was supposed to do. I have come a long way...since way back then...yet and still...this is where I have been. Thank you for sharing, poet. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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HELLO POET: If I didn't, "KNOW," that you wrote this...I would imagine that I wrote it. In other words what I mean is that I can relate to this because: "I have been here, and I have done this before. It was a long time ago...but nonetheless...I have actually experienced living like this. At the time I was just a kid...and this was all that I knew. So I thought that this was my life...and it was what I was supposed to do. I have come a long way...since way back then...yet and still...this is where I have been. Thank you for sharing, poet. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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I appreciate the honor of the six star rating. This was a fun write because it brought back memories for me too. Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
T o be sure it's a bucket and dipper, (eliminate space in to)
An excellent and creative poem based on a difficult set of words. You must be a real poet, my friend. Best wishes in the contest~Debbie
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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T o be sure it's a bucket and dipper, (eliminate space in to)
An excellent and creative poem based on a difficult set of words. You must be a real poet, my friend. Best wishes in the contest~Debbie
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Thank you for pointing out the extra space I have already fixed it. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.