Nature's Poetic Voice.
Viewing comments for Chapter 52 "Nature's Perfume."A sensory appreciation of nature.
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Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Nature's Perfume, has the short-long-short format and brings the subtle wafting of this essential oil to us in a few words that make me want to try it.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
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This haiku, Nature's Perfume, has the short-long-short format and brings the subtle wafting of this essential oil to us in a few words that make me want to try it.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
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Thanks Bill.
That was my intention.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment from Joy Graham
Hello seken,
I think this is my first time reading your poetry. That is a lovely picture that complements your message. I'm always happy to meet a haiku poet. I love the aha moments when done right. Your aha moment didn't disappoint. It brings the scent of lavendar to my nose :) I'm not sure about the word nanna, though. You might have to explain that one to me.
Sincerely Joy xx
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Hello seken,
I think this is my first time reading your poetry. That is a lovely picture that complements your message. I'm always happy to meet a haiku poet. I love the aha moments when done right. Your aha moment didn't disappoint. It brings the scent of lavendar to my nose :) I'm not sure about the word nanna, though. You might have to explain that one to me.
Sincerely Joy xx
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Hi Joy,
lovely to meet you and thank you for reviewing.
I am an Aussie and over here grandmothers are often called nanna as Italian grandmothers are called nonna.
This allows for an ease of understanding about which grandmother is spoken of- grandma or nanna.
I especially like to be called nanna.
I hope this clarifies your question.
Comment from Treischel
My nose is tingling for that whiff of Lavender. A gorgeous composition, blending image and verse in this wonderful 4-7-5 formatted poem that without the capitalization would make an excellent haiku.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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My nose is tingling for that whiff of Lavender. A gorgeous composition, blending image and verse in this wonderful 4-7-5 formatted poem that without the capitalization would make an excellent haiku.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much.
I appreciate your review.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment from Gloria ....
I do so love lavender too, Shirley, not only to see fields of it grow, but also the wonderful things you can make from its blooms.
This is terrific and brings a smile. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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I do so love lavender too, Shirley, not only to see fields of it grow, but also the wonderful things you can make from its blooms.
This is terrific and brings a smile. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Thanks Gloria.
Glad to send a smile.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I could smell the lavender oozing from your words and this is such an exquisite presentation. Lavender smells so pure and natural and I have a lavender plant in a pot on my front porch, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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I could smell the lavender oozing from your words and this is such an exquisite presentation. Lavender smells so pure and natural and I have a lavender plant in a pot on my front porch, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Thanks Dolly,
I appreciate you.
Blessings
Shirley