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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like a welcoming invitation which you may be taken up on! I wish you luck with the contest Rhonnie, Valentines is a long way off yet though! love Dolly x
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This sounds like a welcoming invitation which you may be taken up on! I wish you luck with the contest Rhonnie, Valentines is a long way off yet though! love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
Comment from Frank Colabella
This is a cute poem, but the structure is not that of a haiku. I do like the premise, but perhaps this idea can be worked into something longer, like perhaps a sonnet.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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This is a cute poem, but the structure is not that of a haiku. I do like the premise, but perhaps this idea can be worked into something longer, like perhaps a sonnet.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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SEASON'S GREETING FRANK: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem here. You are appreciated. I wrote this poem the way that I did because according to the writing prompt the normal structure of a haiku is not required. Therefore I wrote it to express it's premise. God bless you, Frank. Cordially: rhonnie69.