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Comment from Frank Colabella
I like how the first and third lines begin with the same words. They give the poem a symmetrical look, and the rhyme scheme contributes to this effect as well.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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I like how the first and third lines begin with the same words. They give the poem a symmetrical look, and the rhyme scheme contributes to this effect as well.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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SEASON'S GREETING FRANK: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from KatyM
Cute little poem. Yep, time for the second half of school. Next break will be Spring Break and then Summer break! I am a retired teacher. While teaching we as Teachers lived for our breaks. lol
Happy Writing, Katy
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Cute little poem. Yep, time for the second half of school. Next break will be Spring Break and then Summer break! I am a retired teacher. While teaching we as Teachers lived for our breaks. lol
Happy Writing, Katy
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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SEASON'S GREETING KATY: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem here. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from meeshu
this very short poem is delightful. You have done a fine job with this, ther is something special about the kids going back to class. our little town just 'feels' different. well done, rhonnie...............meeshu
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this very short poem is delightful. You have done a fine job with this, ther is something special about the kids going back to class. our little town just 'feels' different. well done, rhonnie...............meeshu
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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SEASON'S GREETING MEESHU: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Michele Harber
I love the attitude of your poem, and it perfectly reflects my daughter's feeling about the holiday break. We had several lovely moments over the holidays, and I was sure she'd balk about going to school today but, instead, she left ultra-early, eager to see her friends, and give some small gifts to her teachers. Your poem reflects children's feelings perfectly, and packs quite a punch into only 17 syllables. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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I love the attitude of your poem, and it perfectly reflects my daughter's feeling about the holiday break. We had several lovely moments over the holidays, and I was sure she'd balk about going to school today but, instead, she left ultra-early, eager to see her friends, and give some small gifts to her teachers. Your poem reflects children's feelings perfectly, and packs quite a punch into only 17 syllables. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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SEASON'S GREETING MICHELE: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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Thank you, and God bless you as well. I hope you enjoyed the holidays, and that the new year has begun well for you.