Lettre d' Amour
Eights 'n Sixes28 total reviews
Comment from Richard J
Goodness-ME, Susan!
This may well be your best love/romance/softly sensual poem to date, and it is absolutely perfect for the contest ... a winner, surely.
Some of the highly appealing aspects to your poetry are that it is so well thought out, written, presented, and enjoyed, that Six Stars is most always deserved.
The one to whom you've penned this perfect "Lettre d' Amour" must be one helluva muse.
Thank you ever-so warmly for the honorable mention, Susan, and for using one of my forms to compose such sheer bliss ... "A Big New Year HUG! ~ Richard ; )
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PS: Here's an easy outline for this form:
"EIGHTS 'N SIXES"
by Richard W. Jenkins
Copyright 1 Apr 1987
Any number of 4-line verses about anything:
Aligned left or centered.
Syllable count per verse:
4-4,6 / 4-4,6
Rhyme scheme:
a-a,b / c-c,b
d-d,e / f-f,e
Etc...
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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Goodness-ME, Susan!
This may well be your best love/romance/softly sensual poem to date, and it is absolutely perfect for the contest ... a winner, surely.
Some of the highly appealing aspects to your poetry are that it is so well thought out, written, presented, and enjoyed, that Six Stars is most always deserved.
The one to whom you've penned this perfect "Lettre d' Amour" must be one helluva muse.
Thank you ever-so warmly for the honorable mention, Susan, and for using one of my forms to compose such sheer bliss ... "A Big New Year HUG! ~ Richard ; )
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PS: Here's an easy outline for this form:
"EIGHTS 'N SIXES"
by Richard W. Jenkins
Copyright 1 Apr 1987
Any number of 4-line verses about anything:
Aligned left or centered.
Syllable count per verse:
4-4,6 / 4-4,6
Rhyme scheme:
a-a,b / c-c,b
d-d,e / f-f,e
Etc...
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Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Thank you Richard for teaching me this form..ya know it's one of my fav's, and actually most all of your are. Thank you for such a warm and cozy review! I do appreciate it! :-) Happy New year to you!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written rhyming poem in the form of a love letter to a lover. The letter is carefully written with special ink and letters, a little perfume will also do, and the lover will receive the letter with glee.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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A very well-written rhyming poem in the form of a love letter to a lover. The letter is carefully written with special ink and letters, a little perfume will also do, and the lover will receive the letter with glee.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Hello Sandra..loving your review! Thank you so much and Happy New Year!
Comment from Joy Graham
Hello Susan,
I'm sorry to be out of sixes as this poem has the wow factor in it. I'm in love with this poetry form and will take notes to try it sometime. Where did you find it? I think this is a terrific entry for the rhyming poem contest. I predict this poem will be a top contender. Best wishes to you!
Joy xx
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Hello Susan,
I'm sorry to be out of sixes as this poem has the wow factor in it. I'm in love with this poetry form and will take notes to try it sometime. Where did you find it? I think this is a terrific entry for the rhyming poem contest. I predict this poem will be a top contender. Best wishes to you!
Joy xx
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Hi Joy
,"EIGHTS 'N SIXES"
by Richard W. Jenkins
Copyright 1 Apr 1987
Any number of 4-line verses about anything:
Aligned left or centered.
Syllable count per verse:
4-4,6 / 4-4,6
Rhyme scheme:
a-a,b / c-c,b
d-d,e / f-f,e
Etc...
Richard is a member here..and I love love his original forms. If you try, let him know, he would love that.
Thank you so much for the sweet review! I so appreciate it! Happy New Year to you!
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Does he go by Richard Jenkins?
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https://www.fanstory.com/mypage.jsp?userid=174372
Richard J
His work is amazing.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is absolutely superb Susan. What a beautiful Love poem. The interior rhyme accentuates the end rhyme in nearly every line. The meter is flawless. If this one doesn't win they didn't read it. Outstanding Nancy:)
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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This is absolutely superb Susan. What a beautiful Love poem. The interior rhyme accentuates the end rhyme in nearly every line. The meter is flawless. If this one doesn't win they didn't read it. Outstanding Nancy:)
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Aw Nancy! You are too kind to me. Thank you for such a beautiful and encouraging review! Thank you so much! Happy New year!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a very lovely, creatively-written poem. The meter and rhyme--
including the internal rhyme--are appealing, giving the poem
a songlike quality. Last--certainly not least--it is SO romantic.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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This is a very lovely, creatively-written poem. The meter and rhyme--
including the internal rhyme--are appealing, giving the poem
a songlike quality. Last--certainly not least--it is SO romantic.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Hello Janice, Thank you so much for such a lovely review! Happy New year!!
Comment from Mastery
Faaantastic poetry, my friend. Wow. You have wonderful rhyming and a Shakespeare flavor to it that is remarkable. At least i know i cannot write like this. Brilliant piece and if i had six stars left you would get them, Susan. Bob
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Faaantastic poetry, my friend. Wow. You have wonderful rhyming and a Shakespeare flavor to it that is remarkable. At least i know i cannot write like this. Brilliant piece and if i had six stars left you would get them, Susan. Bob
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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The simple fact that my friend likes this poem is waaaaayyyy better than any star! :-) It's early morning and I am just smiling here! Thank you Bob for reading and leaving such a kind review. Thank you for the continuing support! I do appreciate you! Best wishes in the New Year Bob :-)
Comment from DR DIP
This is one beautiful rhyming poem Susan A great way to start the year I must say.
You have and still have a beautiful way with words. I want to you ranked high where you deserve to be
xxdip
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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This is one beautiful rhyming poem Susan A great way to start the year I must say.
You have and still have a beautiful way with words. I want to you ranked high where you deserve to be
xxdip
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Aw Dip, you are simply a warm and cozy hug.How lucky am I are paths crossed. for all the wonderful things you are...that shining soul of yours compares to none.
Comment from Alison Hendrix
Your work is so pure and so rich and so descriptive! It's truly a pleasure to read and to reread! My favorite is this line:"for seldom seems life mimics dreams" I love this, the entire poem pulls my heart to when my love was young and mysterious and intoxicating and all consuming. Thank you, thank you for sharing!! And...do you have a book of poems for sale?!
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Your work is so pure and so rich and so descriptive! It's truly a pleasure to read and to reread! My favorite is this line:"for seldom seems life mimics dreams" I love this, the entire poem pulls my heart to when my love was young and mysterious and intoxicating and all consuming. Thank you, thank you for sharing!! And...do you have a book of poems for sale?!
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Oh sweet Alison! What a truly lovely review. I am just so pleased you enjoy my work. I can honestly say there is a little bit of me in all I write. Yes, I do have a book out! ( my first :-) Currently working on a Kindle version too. Amazon "Once Upon the Heart by Susan Capozzi. Oh gosh, thank you for even asking.
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I've added your book to my Amazon cart! I can't wait to get it!
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You did?? :-) Thank you! I am just so honored! awww happy tears :-)
Comment from Irish Rain
Wow, this is just beautiful Miss Susan.
I like the 'olde world' language used...very fitting for the time and topic.
Certainly a six, but I am out!!
A lovely entry,
Blessings...
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Wow, this is just beautiful Miss Susan.
I like the 'olde world' language used...very fitting for the time and topic.
Certainly a six, but I am out!!
A lovely entry,
Blessings...
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Aw Judy, coming from you that just makes me just smile. I know your poetry and it is simply outstanding! Thank you so very much for stopping by and making my night. Happy New Year too!
Comment from patcelaw
This is an excellent entry for the rhyming contest. I really like the format of 8,6 syllable count. Happy New Year. Blessings for a wonder filled year. Patricia
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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This is an excellent entry for the rhyming contest. I really like the format of 8,6 syllable count. Happy New Year. Blessings for a wonder filled year. Patricia
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Thank you Pat for stopping by and taking the time to review! :-)
