Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5, Forever Kisses, has the correct formatting and promises that there will be a lot of lip balm available in this household.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019

Thank you. I deeply appreciate all those stars and the witty review!

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

How romantic is this... a wedding photo always makes me smile! I enjoyed reading your entry for the 5-7-5 Love Poem. The presentation and the theme were well-written and romantic. Good job on this short poem and good luck.

All the best.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019

Thank you. I really do appreciate all the wonderful stars, the kind review and the well wishes!

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

This lovely 5-7-5 drives home the point about that one kiss
that is different from all the others--the one that SEALS
the future for those who have made a firm commitment.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019

Thank you. I greatly appreciate all the stars and your kind review.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written and well illustrated 5-7-5 love poem. I love the words you used and the beautiful imagery from the art work to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019

Thank you so much for your kind review and all the stars!

Comment from phill doran

Excellent

Hello Anon
A very good piece - very tight and yet it does not jar; it runs smoothly which is difficult in these short formats.
No punctuation required: again, this reflects how smooth the wording is. You should do well with this in your contest.
cheers
phill

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019

Thank you. I greatly appreciate all the stars and your review!