The Magic Mirror
The humorous side of the timeless mirror6 total reviews
Comment from ciliverde
Well, I think we all go through this sort of thing as the years pass by...it's not much fun to look in the mirror anymore, lol.
"Then I see the sagging face
that two tone shin (should be skin I assume)"
The mirror clears as the winkles (wrinkles?) appear.
Nice job, I like the way you ended it - oh well! What can you do? :))
Carol
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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Well, I think we all go through this sort of thing as the years pass by...it's not much fun to look in the mirror anymore, lol.
"Then I see the sagging face
that two tone shin (should be skin I assume)"
The mirror clears as the winkles (wrinkles?) appear.
Nice job, I like the way you ended it - oh well! What can you do? :))
Carol
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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Thank you Carol. I corrected my errors.
Comment from country ranch writer
We all age and we wish the mirror would see us as we used to be instead of what we are now it is what it is as they say. Nice work up for your poem and much happiness this 2019.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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We all age and we wish the mirror would see us as we used to be instead of what we are now it is what it is as they say. Nice work up for your poem and much happiness this 2019.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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Thank you Country I'm glad you liked it. May you have a happier New Year
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the magic mirror. When our eyes catch the reflection in the mirror we see the younger version of our parents that is very scary, when we cannot understand where the younger us have gone to.
HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU AND YOUR FAMILY
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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A very well-written poem about the magic mirror. When our eyes catch the reflection in the mirror we see the younger version of our parents that is very scary, when we cannot understand where the younger us have gone to.
HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU AND YOUR FAMILY
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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Thank you Sandra.and Many blessing this year to you and your loved ones.
Comment from jmshumate
You have written a very clever poem, and humorous one as well. Turning on the lights made and putting on the glasses made the difference I guess
"That two tone shin" should be skin or shine, I thought I'd point this out in case it's a typo. Thank you for sharing this humorous poem, in the end we are who we are oh well:)
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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You have written a very clever poem, and humorous one as well. Turning on the lights made and putting on the glasses made the difference I guess
"That two tone shin" should be skin or shine, I thought I'd point this out in case it's a typo. Thank you for sharing this humorous poem, in the end we are who we are oh well:)
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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Thank you jmshumate.
Comment from Janilou
What a delightful poem and oh, how I can relate! LOL I sometimes look in the mirror and wonder where I went?
I found no errors in your work. Sounds like a fun writing prompt.
All the best,
Jan Anderegg
(Author of the Julu series)
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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What a delightful poem and oh, how I can relate! LOL I sometimes look in the mirror and wonder where I went?
I found no errors in your work. Sounds like a fun writing prompt.
All the best,
Jan Anderegg
(Author of the Julu series)
Comment Written 31-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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Thank you Janilou I'm glad you liked it. Have a Happy New Year.
Comment from meeshu
You have created some great images here, and your writing is thoughtful and descriptive. the mirror is a fickle mistress. good luck..
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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You have created some great images here, and your writing is thoughtful and descriptive. the mirror is a fickle mistress. good luck..
Comment Written 31-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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Thank you meeshu Glad you like it. Have a wonderful New Year.
