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2 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
I loved this vivid, western tale and really like the lingo you throw into these chapters. I would mention a few things.
Second paragraph. Pedro from Mexico...had the most experience...
Fifth para... Ma used to
Great write, Catherin
Melissa
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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I loved this vivid, western tale and really like the lingo you throw into these chapters. I would mention a few things.
Second paragraph. Pedro from Mexico...had the most experience...
Fifth para... Ma used to
Great write, Catherin
Melissa
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the excellent rating and the kind words. Appreciate the suggestions....will check it out and make necessary adjustments. Catherin
Comment from country ranch writer
Not a dull moment here in this town wow saving a young boy and a damsel in distress who could ask for more and now going out to bury dead folks who did no harm to anyone.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2018
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Not a dull moment here in this town wow saving a young boy and a damsel in distress who could ask for more and now going out to bury dead folks who did no harm to anyone.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2018
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Thank you for your excellent rating and your kid words. Catherin
