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The Gift Return Caper

Animal Crackers Club

24 total reviews 
Comment from Ms. Snyder
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I'm sorry that by now I've run out of the six stars the hilarious story deserves. The babies are a riot! I definitely need to fan you because I am now in need of a regular fix of their antics. Great dialogue! I'm in awe of how much you were able to get across so quickly. Cheers, Fonda

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
    What lovely things to say Thank you so much.
Comment from Dawn Munro
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Wow, congratulations on the nomination for SOM! I enjoyed this immensely (but then you KNOW I would)! Those two sound like they keep you hopping. (hahahaha) Well done, my friend. I'll have to be sure Prissy reads this one. *grin*

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
    Thank you for this delightful review. I hope Prissy likes it, too. Just being nominated is enough for me. 8-)
reply by Dawn Munro on 05-Jan-2019
    :))))) A pleasure, Yvonne!!!
Comment from Bill Schott
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This short, short story, The Gift Return Caper, is pretty funny and seems to jibe with the information I have on cats and their need to best human decision-making with good old cat know-how.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
    Thank you, Bill. They're very smart, and come up with the funniest things.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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Great dialogue story Yvonne, and well told from the POV of PC and Endeavour. It was easy to imagine this very funny scene through your words and it certainly left me chuckling. Well told,
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
    Thank you so much, Valda. I'm so happy it made you laugh.
Comment from judiverse
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Great fun, and I love the name Endeavour. Trying to disguise himself as you seems a bit of a reach, even for an intelligent cat. I wonder if cats do get tired of the same old toys. My cats have so many they don't seem at all interested in. Great dialogue with the cats, and a cute ending. My cats, unfortunately, can reach the door handle. They know how to use it, too. Very entertaining. Happy New Year to you. judi

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2018
    PC tries to pry the tab on the can, but so far hasn't been able to. Yes, he can reach the doorknob, too, but I denied him that talent in the story. lol

    I rotate their mice. I have a big jar of catnip with mice in it. After a while, I give those to the cats, and put the old ones in the jar. That way, they think they're getting new toys. Hahahaha
reply by judiverse on 30-Dec-2018
    My cats have a whole box of toys, but there are only a few that the like to play with. They're hard to figure out. judi
Comment from LaRosa
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Oh, this is really cute. You must really know your kitties. I loved the suspense of ridiculousness as PC and Endeavor work out a truly cartoon-making scheme.
Not knowing what the name PC stands for, I was playing games with exchanging it for Endeavor, since it fits the personality so well. :)

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2018
    I'm so glad you like this. Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Ulla
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Hahahahaha, Yvonne, this is hilarious. Cat's are just like that, aren't they? So full of mischief. No wonder Tom And Jerry was invented. Your story is adorable and with a twist in the tail. Loved it. Warm regards. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2018
    Awww, thank you so much for this lovely review. Yes, cats are great fun. What they haven't thought of hasn't been invented yet. lol
Comment from BeasPeas
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This is so cute. Catnip mice, indeed. I opted to go for the catnip treats for Jewel, which are always welcomed. I like the idea of the laser light beam, too. I have one here someplace, but can't find it. Love the image to accompany your fun piece. Marilyn

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2018
    Thank you, Marilyn. I'm so glad you like it. I'm trying to improve my prose writing. I have a laser beam, too, and I can't find mine, either. hahahahaha
reply by BeasPeas on 30-Dec-2018
    Maybe yours and mine ran off together. I just ran across mine a week or so ago and now I can't find it again. Oh well, poor kitty's loss. Marilyn
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Love it, Yvonne....I'm always imagining what could be going on in my girls' heads when I walk in on some of their antics!! ;) Thanx for the smile -- much needed as I am 'hiding' out on the front porch at my inlaws!! ;) ;) Happy New Year from my corner of the world to yours! :) Yvette ;)

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2018
    Thank you, Yvette. Happy New Year to you!
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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Ignore it, that's what he would do. May as well save my money. He always found his own toys, like climbing up inside the Christmas tree. He's gone now and I miss his capers. This was cute Yvonne. Hug them for me. Happy New Year. Nancy:)

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2018
    I've hugged them. They keep me laughing. Thank you so much. Happy New Year!