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My First GV

one of life's worse moments

6 total reviews 
Comment from Joan E.
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You really drew us into your story with your dramatic, opening paragraph. I thought you were having a gynecological exam, but I was not certain and remained caught up in your tale and clever conclusion. Best wishes in the competition- Joan

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 30-Dec-2018
    many thanks. yep, I was trying to mislead you at first. Had to have a little tension, though of course, the first exam causes enough tension for ten people! :)
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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Wow! You've described this encounter at the doctor's office as if it were a horror movie. I think that you may have found some inspiration to write a horror story. It's superbly descriptive and sounds very traumatic. Women all over that read this can either relate, or, are wondering what they're getting themselves in to. I enjoyed reading this very informative and very well written poem. Well done!

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
    thanks, Jeffrey. It's a spoof. Was trying to throw the reader off with the first part, hinting that she had been kidnapped, etc.
    However, in actuality, it was pretty accurate. :)
    thanks for your neat review.
Comment from Earl Corp
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Thanks for the note at the bottom, I had no clue what a GV was since I'm a male. Good job in building up the suspense to the twist in the plot. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
    many thanks - especially for recognizing the beginning as a false lead. and thanks for the good luck wish!
Comment from Sugarray77
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Excellent job on writing this vivid story about going to the gynecologist. Such a tension filled first visit is very clearly described in your tale. Good job on descriptive phrasing and emotive explanations. Well done.

Melissa

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
    thank you. I was trying to be misleading in the first part - make the reader think she was somewhere else, captive, then the real scenario - which was worse. :)
Comment from susand3022
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OMG... This is too funny!!! Author, whoever you are, when this is all over please let me know so I can read you some more! When you were describing pregnant women I was sure thi poor girl had been abducted by aliens! Well... just as bad... it is a torture chamber!!! LOL OMG.... too funny!!!

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
    thank you, Susan, You have made my day!
Comment from tfawcus
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You have certainly achieved a nightmarish effect with this one! The story is drawn out in a way that gives your reader a sense of that anguished waiting time. and the effect it has on the patient's nerves.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
    and that is exactly what it was - nightmarish and filled with anxiety!