Family Ties Volume two.
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "A Mutual Refuge."Second book Of Series.
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed reading your contest entry. You did a good job except line 2 needs one more syllable--maybe add "it's" OR 'one' after Wee.. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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I enjoyed reading your contest entry. You did a good job except line 2 needs one more syllable--maybe add "it's" OR 'one' after Wee.. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 28-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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SEASON'S GREETINGS JAN: Thank you for viewing and complementing my work here. You are appreciated. Check with the pronunciation of the word, "OUR," in your dictionary. You will find that there are more than one way to pronounce that word. The word, "OUR," is a pronoun. It's pronunciation can be stressed, or not stressed. Example: Not stressed. iar. Stressed. ou'er. I used the stressed pronunciation. Thank you for sharing. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from donette1914
very clever
love the way your words draw ones in
it becomes alive and really touches one's heart
very well penned
it was a pleasure
donette1914 12/28 /2018
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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very clever
love the way your words draw ones in
it becomes alive and really touches one's heart
very well penned
it was a pleasure
donette1914 12/28 /2018
Comment Written 28-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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SEASON'S GREETING DONETTE1914: Thank you for viewing and complementing my work here. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
