Comment from jessizero

Excellent

Your poem was sweet and romantic. I am glad you found love after having your wings broken, so to speak. I am sorry you lost your husband, but it sounds like you have many great memories. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2022

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Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

A beautifully penned poem of a love that is everlasting.
I can hear your love for him in every word.
Thank you for sharing
Good luck in the contest.

Best wishes
Mary

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2022

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Comment from Aussie

Excellent

Hello my friend. Long time no see? How are you? I loved your entry for the Love Poem. True love never dies, but oh, the loneliness persists. One day you will meet again, your body whole and your love reunited. Blessings, Kay xx

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2022

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Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

Patricia the Lord knew He would have a faithful servant in you. I'm God had was in the rescue and the man who rescued got a jewel of a wife. I love the wedding photo. You are both good-looking people. Your hat and veil looks a lot like the one I wore at my wedding.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2022

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Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Patricia, This is a very beautiful and well written poem about your love and marriage and when your husband passed. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the picture of you two. Beautiful couple! Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2022

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Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

A beautiful poem and a very fitting entry for the contest. A great tribute to your husband and the memories you share. My husband passed away 22 years ago and I still miss him very much.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2022

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Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

What a sweet poem about your husband. It is so well-written, descriptive, I could feel your love devotion to him on every line. I could feel your heartbreak or losing him way to soon. Great job as always.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2018

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Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I admired your poignant love poem and your "wings/fly" metaphor. Today must be a difficult day, and I am glad you put your feelings and memories into this free verse. Best wishes in the competition- Joan

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2018

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Comment from susand3022

Good

Good evening Pat, This is a lovely poem. I was a little lost when you lost the rhyme in the last few lines. It set me completely off my rythm. Perhaps you can work it back into meter with the first part? It is, however, a lovely tribute to your husband. The photo is a beautiful touch. :)

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 Comment Written 28-Dec-2018

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Comment from judiverse

Excellent

What a wonderful expression of love, and best of luck in the contest. Too bad your husband died so young, or you could have enjoyed many more happy years together. The broken wings analogy is excellent and your lines flow very well. Excellent work. judi

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2018

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