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Comment from jmshumate
Good job on this. You've rhymed your words well in this short poem, and used some good word choices to do it. "Feast your carnal eyes" this is a very good line. Is this about the movie pretty poison?
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Good job on this. You've rhymed your words well in this short poem, and used some good word choices to do it. "Feast your carnal eyes" this is a very good line. Is this about the movie pretty poison?
Comment Written 27-Dec-2018
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You are right, rhonnie. All that glitters could be fools gold. I enjoyed reading your poem. Good job on it structure and message. Thanks for sharing. Jan
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You are right, rhonnie. All that glitters could be fools gold. I enjoyed reading your poem. Good job on it structure and message. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 27-Dec-2018
Comment from Kathleen Washnis
Interesting type of humor on men being lustful for the girl not knowing that she can kill you! They are blind to their carnal lust not realizing she totes a gun! Picture is unique and perfect words to accompany this. Well done!
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Interesting type of humor on men being lustful for the girl not knowing that she can kill you! They are blind to their carnal lust not realizing she totes a gun! Picture is unique and perfect words to accompany this. Well done!
Comment Written 27-Dec-2018