Elf on the Shelf
A clerihew poem3 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
A truly humorous Clerihew poem :) Great job! Very entertaining and timely. I love the artwork you chose. The title? Very, very clever.
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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
A truly humorous Clerihew poem :) Great job! Very entertaining and timely. I love the artwork you chose. The title? Very, very clever.
This is a great contest entry!
Comment Written 28-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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Thanks for the encouraging review. I did not coin elf on the shelf but dang. look at his face! He looks like those old fashioned elves, except the rosy cheeks have faded. Cheers, j
Comment from mermaids
This is a funny poem, you have me laughing. Your words are true, the VP does not seem to do anything. Excellent use of words that is humorous and true to life. I like the analogy to the elf on the shelf.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
This is a funny poem, you have me laughing. Your words are true, the VP does not seem to do anything. Excellent use of words that is humorous and true to life. I like the analogy to the elf on the shelf.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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Thanks for the insightful review. During that meeting with Chuck and Nancy he just faded and blended into the wallpaper. Cheers, j
Comment from RodG
This is excellent political satire mocking our Vice President who does seem to be non-existent.these days, or is he merely lost inTrump's shadow? Good use of a simile to describe Pence.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
This is excellent political satire mocking our Vice President who does seem to be non-existent.these days, or is he merely lost inTrump's shadow? Good use of a simile to describe Pence.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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Thanks for the insightful review Rod. He really does look like one of those old fashioned elves, except his rosy cheeks have faded. Cheers, j