Family Ties Volume two.
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "I Think."Second book Of Series.
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Comment from nor84
I wanted to give you a heads-up. Please refer to the contest announcement, which states that there is a 700 word minimum word count required. When I checked this with Microsoft Word, you were a number of words short, but you probably have time to fix it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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I wanted to give you a heads-up. Please refer to the contest announcement, which states that there is a 700 word minimum word count required. When I checked this with Microsoft Word, you were a number of words short, but you probably have time to fix it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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HELLO NOR84: Thank you for your, "Heads-Up." You've lifted my head. Thanx. You are appreciated. I will get busy on correcting that. God Bless you and yours, nor84. Cordially: rhonnie69;
Comment from beizanten
wow, a very romantic and rather deep approach. As a woman I can say the tips is very good. I would swoon if a man treat me like you say here. Thanks for sharing
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wow, a very romantic and rather deep approach. As a woman I can say the tips is very good. I would swoon if a man treat me like you say here. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 28-Dec-2018
Comment from Earl Corp
I have to give you a lot of credit. Putting the primpt in a poem that long that rhymes, makes sense, and entertains takes a lot of talent. Good luck in the contest.
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I have to give you a lot of credit. Putting the primpt in a poem that long that rhymes, makes sense, and entertains takes a lot of talent. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2018
Comment from jmshumate
You have written a good contest entry, and I think your approach on how to woo a woman is a wise one. I have found that after your married is when the real work begins :) Thank you for sharing this and good luck in the contest.
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You have written a good contest entry, and I think your approach on how to woo a woman is a wise one. I have found that after your married is when the real work begins :) Thank you for sharing this and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2018
Comment from QC Poet
Thank you for sharing this poem.
The tale is true the key is to know what to look for in a woman. We are going on 43+ yrs., married for 39. The rhythmic flow went from each sentence to every other further on which is fine. Great job on it.
It helps when you start looking when you know what you are seeking for compatibility.
Looking for a party girl you'll get one.
Enjoyable poem Thanks for Sharing.
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Thank you for sharing this poem.
The tale is true the key is to know what to look for in a woman. We are going on 43+ yrs., married for 39. The rhythmic flow went from each sentence to every other further on which is fine. Great job on it.
It helps when you start looking when you know what you are seeking for compatibility.
Looking for a party girl you'll get one.
Enjoyable poem Thanks for Sharing.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2018
