Comment from Miss Sherry

Excellent

There is something eerie about this artwork...and your words dispel the gloom. Midwinter days can be so dark...You have done well with this form and I enjoyed the read and the vision it left behind

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018

Thanks for that interesting review zanya

Comment from Cindy McIntyre

Excellent

You have a wonderful opening verse: "chilly golden rays"... great word choice that evoke a lot of visual imagery. Your 5-7-5 is nicely written and formatted. A good contest entry. I hope you do well in the contest. Good luck.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018

Thanks for those encouraging words zanya

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Good job on this verse as the entry for the 5-7-5 winter prompt. The use of a snow picture really helped set the tone for this poem. Also, the term mid-winter gives a definite timeframe and adds depth to this piece. Well done.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018

Thanks for those interesting review comments zanya

Comment from jmshumate

Excellent

A well written 5/7/5. One that I know well. I work out side and some of the coldest winter days are when the sun rays are shining through. It's really bizarre it works that way. Thank you for sharing this.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018

Thanks for those interesting sentiments on this little poem zanya