Comment from Miss Sherry

Excellent

All of a sudden The Nutcracker echoed through my room and I felt like dancing. Very nice combination of art and words. Snowflakes can most assuredly dance on ecookvery surface, giving the world a clean new blanket to hide fallen bicycles, rusty barbecue cookers and even small dogs!

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018

Thanks for the read and the comments. I think you may have a poem in your description of bikes, dogs and BBQ's.

Comment from C. Gale Burnett

Excellent

This is a beautifully creative poem and presentation.
Your chosen font, font size, and centering is eye appealing and gives a feel to your words.
A perfect contest entry! Well done!

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018

Thank you for the read and the encouraging words. Much appreciated

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Yes, I too favor this 5-7-5 Haiku syllabled style.

My favorite images and phrases include

whirling - swirling
'snow ballerinas' contrasting with 'frozen ... stage'

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018

Thanks much for the read and the review.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem about winter
with wonderful imagery in the ballerina metaphor
of snow flakes.The art art work matches perfectly
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
RS

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018

Thanks much for your read and review.