Comment from C. Gale Burnett

Excellent

Oh, now this is a perfect contest entry!
I love the rhyme.
I love your focus at the end, being 'Grandma's angel placed gently on high'.
Beautiful presentation and color scheme!
Well done!
I wish you the very best in the contest!
Gale

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018

Thanks for the encouraging review Gale. Those 3 rhymes of tangle, bangle and dangle made me laugh. Wishing you and your family a Merry Christmas and a magical New Year. Your friend in prose, judester

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count and shape is good.
-It would make a good Christmas tree!
-I like how you added rhyme to the poem.
-I like all of the description in
the first line, and the images
of all the trimmings on the
tree throughout the poem.
-Very nice conclusion with
"Grandma's angel"
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2018

Thanks for the review Pam. Yeah, here was my etheree poem, shaped like a tree, poem about a tree and I do this. rebel. Cheers, all the best, judester

reply by Pam (respa) on 22-Dec-2018

You are very welcome, judester.

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

Your etheree paints a lovely appealing scene for the reader. Those
chipped, old decorations are the sweetest--the most valuable.
And Grandma's angel is the perfect topper! Good job

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2018

Thanks for the insightful review Janice. I am off right now to decorate my own tree, Merry Christmas to you and family. judester