Family Ties Volume two.
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Comment from Sugarray77
This is so cute, Rhonnie. I enjoyed the rhyming banter that you created in this verse and how it flowed along happily. Good job on this piece and good luck in the competition.
All the best,
Melissa
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This is so cute, Rhonnie. I enjoyed the rhyming banter that you created in this verse and how it flowed along happily. Good job on this piece and good luck in the competition.
All the best,
Melissa
Comment Written 24-Dec-2018
Comment from Donald T. Jarker
Ronnie, This is a marvellous and lovely poem, which is superbly and beautifully set up for a great last line. By the time the punchline was delivered, the excitement had truly built up. I did chuckle at your funny and, to me, feel good verse. On behalf of all GrandDads who have never really grown up, many thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Donald.
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Ronnie, This is a marvellous and lovely poem, which is superbly and beautifully set up for a great last line. By the time the punchline was delivered, the excitement had truly built up. I did chuckle at your funny and, to me, feel good verse. On behalf of all GrandDads who have never really grown up, many thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Donald.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2018
