Impossible to Hold
Poetry in Under Ten Words Competition Entry12 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
A bit hard to read with all that coloring of SILVER. Every one has daydreams and never give up on them for dreams can come true.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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A bit hard to read with all that coloring of SILVER. Every one has daydreams and never give up on them for dreams can come true.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Hope your eyes have recovered. Merry Christmas!
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Smiles
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Smiles
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Y M Roger, This is really the best one beautifully presented and lovely words Congratulations on your win well deserved . Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Hi Y M Roger, This is really the best one beautifully presented and lovely words Congratulations on your win well deserved . Cheers Christine
Comment Written 21-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for your review and 'congrats' today, Chrissy -- I so appreciate your taking the time to do so! :) ;) Sending some holiday daydreams your way to last through the week ahead!! :) ;)
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet!
happy to see that you are winning .. I gave you your 9th well earned vote .
You wrote an excellent 9 liner...I love your poetic description of daydreams and your presentation works well.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Ciao poet!
happy to see that you are winning .. I gave you your 9th well earned vote .
You wrote an excellent 9 liner...I love your poetic description of daydreams and your presentation works well.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Oh, thank you so very much for your wonderful comments, tempeste -- you have put a real smile on my face when it certainly needed it!! ;) :) So glad you enjoyed! :) May you have a wonderful holiday season getting lost in at least a few cheerful daydreams of your own! :)
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
You are SO GOOD! Perfect title, perfect artwork, perfect color scheme, but the words themselves were the ultimate perfection.
You have so much natural talent, but I know how much thought and work you put into your writing and presentation. It really shows!
You will do extremely well in the contest!
C. Gale
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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You are SO GOOD! Perfect title, perfect artwork, perfect color scheme, but the words themselves were the ultimate perfection.
You have so much natural talent, but I know how much thought and work you put into your writing and presentation. It really shows!
You will do extremely well in the contest!
C. Gale
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Oh, thank you so very much for your wonderful comments, Gale -- you have put a real smile on my face when it certainly needed it!! ;) :) So glad you enjoyed! :) May you have a wonderful holiday season getting lost in at least a few cheerful daydreams of your own! :)
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles author
you are right day dreaming are just wishful thoughts of what you may not get, but I found to day dream helped to make my wish some day come to reality. Gert
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Smiles author
you are right day dreaming are just wishful thoughts of what you may not get, but I found to day dream helped to make my wish some day come to reality. Gert
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Oh, thank you so very much for your wonderful comments, Gert -- you have put a real smile on my face, ma'am!! ;) :) So glad you enjoyed! :) May you have a wonderful holiday season getting lost in at least a few cheerful daydreams of your own! :)
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Smiles you are so welcome
same to you have joyful Holidays
gert
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written ten-word poem about our daydreams that become impossible to hold on to these days because our lives become so busy their are simply no time to spend on daydreams.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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A very well-written ten-word poem about our daydreams that become impossible to hold on to these days because our lives become so busy their are simply no time to spend on daydreams.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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So glad you enjoyed Sandra! :) Thanx for stopping in and may you have a wonderful holiday season getting lost in at least a few cheerful daydreams of your own! :)
Comment from kahpot
Yes, just beyond reach but if we put in an effort such as you have on this excellent short poem, we will achieve, very well written and presented, best wishes for your competition****kahpot
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Yes, just beyond reach but if we put in an effort such as you have on this excellent short poem, we will achieve, very well written and presented, best wishes for your competition****kahpot
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for dropping by, kahpot -- so good of you to stop in for the read and review!! ;) :) Here's wishing you wonderful Holiday Daydreams throughout the Season! :)
Comment from AdaJulie
Now i miss spring! I love spring colors; which you brought alive in my mind. Hope is now in my heart as I hope spring comes soon. Gorgeous imagery! You have talent in each word
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Now i miss spring! I love spring colors; which you brought alive in my mind. Hope is now in my heart as I hope spring comes soon. Gorgeous imagery! You have talent in each word
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for dropping by, Ada -- you're welcome to stop in anytime!! ;) :) Here's wishing you wonderful Holiday Daydreams throughout the Season! :)
Comment from donette1914
how lovely is this?
very nice artwork and i hope you do well in the contest
this is very well penned
very believable and you made this come to life
i appreciated the time you put into this
dec 19 2018 donette1914
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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how lovely is this?
very nice artwork and i hope you do well in the contest
this is very well penned
very believable and you made this come to life
i appreciated the time you put into this
dec 19 2018 donette1914
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for dropping by, Donette -- so good of you to stop in for the read and review!! ;) :) Here's wishing you wonderful Holiday Daydreams throughout the Season! :)
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent nine word poem for the contest
which wonderful wording and a great presentation
that simulates the art work very well
Good title, too
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
and for the holidays
RS
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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You've written an excellent nine word poem for the contest
which wonderful wording and a great presentation
that simulates the art work very well
Good title, too
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
and for the holidays
RS
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for dropping by, RS -- so good of you to stop in for the read and review!! ;) :) Here's wishing you wonderful Holiday Daydreams throughout the Season! :)