Under Ten
Write a poem by using under ten words13 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fun answer to the contest's questioning of the poet to write under ten lines, you did and answered the question too, he he he, what more can I say, very clever, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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This is a fun answer to the contest's questioning of the poet to write under ten lines, you did and answered the question too, he he he, what more can I say, very clever, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Hi Dolly Thanls for reviewing my mine well they asked for under ten so I took it literally H Ha Cheers
Comment from BeasPeas
Fantastic job with this cute poem. Unique and humorous. Amusingly composed and illustrated. Good luck in the contest with this terrific entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Fantastic job with this cute poem. Unique and humorous. Amusingly composed and illustrated. Good luck in the contest with this terrific entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Hi Marilyn, A bit of fun woth under ten I did what they asked for Cheers
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
This is hysterically funny, and a great contest entry! Love your rhyme, and love your pink nine. He has a lot of character. I also enjoyed how you bounced your words around. You put a lot of thought into this humorous work! I wish you the very best in the contest!
Gale
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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This is hysterically funny, and a great contest entry! Love your rhyme, and love your pink nine. He has a lot of character. I also enjoyed how you bounced your words around. You put a lot of thought into this humorous work! I wish you the very best in the contest!
Gale
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Hi Gale,cThank ypu and glad you had a laugh Well I only did what was asked for under ten LOL Cheers for ypur best wishes
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles author
I must say you made me put a silly grin on my face of how you said well that
anything under ten you will
Rhyme This Is mine I'll do 9
Gert
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Smiles author
I must say you made me put a silly grin on my face of how you said well that
anything under ten you will
Rhyme This Is mine I'll do 9
Gert
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Hi Gert, That is good a silly grin is what I wanted and I only followed the prompt Ha Ha Cheers
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You are welcome Gert
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hey, when you're right, you're right, Anonymous Poet.
And the number 9 IS, in fact, just under ten.
And you know what they say, right?
You just can't argue with the facts.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Hey, when you're right, you're right, Anonymous Poet.
And the number 9 IS, in fact, just under ten.
And you know what they say, right?
You just can't argue with the facts.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Hi Dean, Thanks and no you cant only following direction LOL Cheers
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You're welcome and good luck!
Cheers,
~Dean
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem with ten or less words. You see an opportunity to be witty and different to put a smile on reviewers faces after all the serious attempts of others
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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A very well-written poem with ten or less words. You see an opportunity to be witty and different to put a smile on reviewers faces after all the serious attempts of others
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Hi Sandra, Thank you for reviewing my nine words and yes I thought a light hearted view may be the way to go Cheers
Comment from rhonnie69
MERRY CHRISTMAS POET. I like this under ten word poem that you have posted here in that you have been entertaining and clever here. This posting get your reader's attention and holds it to the end of your message. This is good, poet. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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MERRY CHRISTMAS POET. I like this under ten word poem that you have posted here in that you have been entertaining and clever here. This posting get your reader's attention and holds it to the end of your message. This is good, poet. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Hi rhonnie69 Thanks for looking in on my poem for this contest. I only followed the prompt requirements LOL Cheers
Comment from OPALWAY3
Well, I guess you did do under Ten. This one made me smile and I'm still smiling as I write this review. The moral of this piece, you gave them what they had asked for. The art work made it work.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Well, I guess you did do under Ten. This one made me smile and I'm still smiling as I write this review. The moral of this piece, you gave them what they had asked for. The art work made it work.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Hi Opalways3 Thank ypu for yourreview and yes well they asked for nine words under 10 and that is what they got LOL Cheers
Comment from Sugarray77
You have created a very humorous and fun entry for the Under Ten competition. I think your approach plus the fantastic pink nine is perfect... it sets the reader in a humorous frame of mind. Good luck and good job.
Melissa
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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You have created a very humorous and fun entry for the Under Ten competition. I think your approach plus the fantastic pink nine is perfect... it sets the reader in a humorous frame of mind. Good luck and good job.
Melissa
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Hi Melissa, thank you and always ready to do something a bit out there with these contests. I found the pink nine on google Cheers
Comment from Raul1
I like how you made the rhymes with the words nine and mine. I think it's funny. This was hard for you to make, but it was worth it. Excellent poem! Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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I like how you made the rhymes with the words nine and mine. I think it's funny. This was hard for you to make, but it was worth it. Excellent poem! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Hi Raul, Thank you for reading and reviewing my contest post and ai had fun doing this one like this Cheers
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You're welcome