Need in Silhouette
Visible only when your light finds them...28 total reviews
Comment from BelieveInTruthAndGood
Congratulations for winning the 5-line poetry contest. This poem is beautiful and very well thought out. It made me read it numerous times and analyse how I feel about it and each time I found a new meaning to it. Congratulations!
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018
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Congratulations for winning the 5-line poetry contest. This poem is beautiful and very well thought out. It made me read it numerous times and analyse how I feel about it and each time I found a new meaning to it. Congratulations!
Comment Written 26-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018
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Thank you for stopping in for the read and review -- please know that you are welcome to stop by any time -- rain or shine, contest or not -- to share and have some iced tea! ;) ;) Be sure to spare a prayer or more for all those in need especially during this holiday season and have a very warm and wonderful time with family and friends -- celebrate life!! :) ;) :) Yvette :)
Comment from dragonpoet
It seems this destitute man is searching for the light and the end to the tunnel to lead him into a better life. We all should find ways to help him.
Congrats on your win.
Happy Holidays and keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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It seems this destitute man is searching for the light and the end to the tunnel to lead him into a better life. We all should find ways to help him.
Congrats on your win.
Happy Holidays and keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 23-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for your read and review, dragonpoet -- your comments are always appreciated! :) :) Be sure to spare a prayer or more for all those in need especially during this holiday season and have a very warm and wonderful time with family and friends -- celebrate life!! :) ;) :) Yvette :)
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Don't mention it. It is the reason we are here.
Same to you.
Joan
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Don't mention it. It is the reason we are here.
Same to you.
Joan
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your thought-provoking, philosophical 5 Line Poem and your embedding it in the dramatic picture to emphasize the social commentary. Many kudos on winning the contest with this well-crafted work- Joan
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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I admired your thought-provoking, philosophical 5 Line Poem and your embedding it in the dramatic picture to emphasize the social commentary. Many kudos on winning the contest with this well-crafted work- Joan
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for stopping by today, Joan, and for the 'kudos' -- you are welcome to drop by any time, rain or shine! :) :) Be sure to spare a prayer or more for all those in need especially during this holiday season and have a very warm and wonderful time with family and friends -- celebrate life!! :) ;) :) Yvette :)
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Many thanks for your good wishes and reminder about being compassionate to those in need. Have a joyful holiday and healthful, new year- Joan
Comment from rama devi
Wow-I can see why this won the contest. It's certainly the best one I've read during my reviews lately. Powerfully presented as well. Fluid flow. The intensity in tone and phrasing style is dramatic and effective. I love the phonics of D sounds too--both alliterative and consonant. The opening two words carry so much weight. clothed in donations speaks volumes too. Shadows seeking definition--brilliant!
Wish I had a six. This is perfect.
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Wow-I can see why this won the contest. It's certainly the best one I've read during my reviews lately. Powerfully presented as well. Fluid flow. The intensity in tone and phrasing style is dramatic and effective. I love the phonics of D sounds too--both alliterative and consonant. The opening two words carry so much weight. clothed in donations speaks volumes too. Shadows seeking definition--brilliant!
Wish I had a six. This is perfect.
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much, rd -- always enjoy hearing from you over in this little part of the world! ;) :) :) Take care and have a wonderful Christmas Season! :)
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Thanks, Roger. Here in Florida right now! Happy X-mas!
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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So, I'm sure no one reads these, but I wanted to say that this has given me a smile to last through at least most of my visit with in-laws this week! :) :) I would add 'LOL', but I'm actually serious! :) :) :)
Comment from Sugarray77
What a moving and heart wrenching photograph that is a showcase for need and want. Your verse supports that concept. This is well written and presented to the reader in a poignant manner. Good job.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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What a moving and heart wrenching photograph that is a showcase for need and want. Your verse supports that concept. This is well written and presented to the reader in a poignant manner. Good job.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for your read and review, Melissa -- your comments are always appreciated! :) :) Be sure to spare a prayer or more for all those in need especially during this holiday season and have a very warm and wonderful time with family and friends -- celebrate life!! :) ;) :) Yvette :)
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Very powerful poem and your photo adds to the depth of message. Your line, clothed in donations" really caught my eye and touched my heart. A well-written five lines. I hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Very powerful poem and your photo adds to the depth of message. Your line, clothed in donations" really caught my eye and touched my heart. A well-written five lines. I hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for your read and review, Cindy -- your comments are always appreciated! :) :) Be sure to spare a prayer or more for all those in need especially during this holiday season and have a very warm and wonderful time with family and friends -- celebrate life!! :) ;) :) Yvette :)
Comment from Shanbreen
Wow! "Tattered shadows clothed in donations." It's superb. You must be one of the most prolific poetry writers on Fan Story -- and you are darn good at it. Well done Yvette. In case I don't have a chance to review another one of yours before Christmas, here's wishing you and yours a very Merry Christmas and a Bubbly New Year. =)
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Wow! "Tattered shadows clothed in donations." It's superb. You must be one of the most prolific poetry writers on Fan Story -- and you are darn good at it. Well done Yvette. In case I don't have a chance to review another one of yours before Christmas, here's wishing you and yours a very Merry Christmas and a Bubbly New Year. =)
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Wow, Shanbreen -- you flatter me...but I'll take it! :) :)LOL! LOL! Seriously, though, I am glad that you enjoyed this and that it touched you .... holidays have a way of doing that to me, I guess. :) :) I do hope you have a wonderful Merry Christmas and enjoy some 'bubbly' New Year -- celebrate life! :) ) Take care! :) Yvette :)
Comment from Kelly Grim
This is pretty darn good, my friend! The first two lines are great, and "clothed in donations" says so much without saying it... lovely last two lines. Well written, Yvette! And as always, excellent presentation too!
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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This is pretty darn good, my friend! The first two lines are great, and "clothed in donations" says so much without saying it... lovely last two lines. Well written, Yvette! And as always, excellent presentation too!
Comment Written 18-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for your detailed review, Kelly -- it is always appreciated when another author actually takes the time to point out particulars about a work! :) :) Be sure to spare a prayer or more for all those in need especially during this holiday season and have a very warm and wonderful time with family and friends -- celebrate life!! :) ;) :) Yvette :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This five-line poem, Need in Sillouette, finds those who found themselves in the low end of life and need help to make it through until things can turn around.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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This five-line poem, Need in Sillouette, finds those who found themselves in the low end of life and need help to make it through until things can turn around.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for your read and review, Bill -- your comments are always appreciated! :) :) Be sure to spare a prayer or more for all those in need especially during this holiday season and have a very warm and wonderful time with family and friends -- celebrate life!! :) ;) :) Yvette :)
