Comment from Ms. Snyder

Excellent

Wow this story was good. Why go through all the motions though? Men, you just want the eyeful don't ya? And I get the writing prompt - That was certainly best served cold! I love the way you write! I think your my contest pick. I hope to read more of your writing once I find out who you are and if I'm not already reading your work. Thanks for sharing a good story, an honest story and one that was set up well. Cheers, Fonda

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018

Thanks for the great review, Ms. Snyder, and your kind words. I am HarryT. Have a wonderful holiday season.

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

such resolve! I am proud of you. for a few days you will consider maybe you missed out , were to hasty. but in the end you will see that morals and values lead you to a better place. you and the new girl will be so happy..

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018

Thanks for your encouraging words and you are so right. Things worked out very well.

Comment from AdaJulie

Excellent

Well done, layers of meaning,
Layers of enjoyment! There are also layers of Talent here!
New discovery with each

effort!
Thank you I love it

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018

Wow, thanks much for the encouraging review. Much appreciated.