Man for God
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Note to Self?"God Helps man who lives to work for mankind
185 total reviews
Comment from R.E.R.
Wow! What an interesting and fun to read poem. You did a great job with this, and the vocabulary you employed is exceptional. Well done! Have a lovely day
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Wow! What an interesting and fun to read poem. You did a great job with this, and the vocabulary you employed is exceptional. Well done! Have a lovely day
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
Comment from Bluesatinbutterfly
An interesting view point and hard principals to live by so I wish you all the strength you may need to fulfil your goals and aspirations for the future, thank you.
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An interesting view point and hard principals to live by so I wish you all the strength you may need to fulfil your goals and aspirations for the future, thank you.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your words are well-chosen as a note to self. However, they could apply to most all writers of all genres. Your did a good job formatting your work. Your words are descriptive and give sound advice.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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Your words are well-chosen as a note to self. However, they could apply to most all writers of all genres. Your did a good job formatting your work. Your words are descriptive and give sound advice.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
Comment from Dilettante junior
Great piece. I really appreciate the free style, your own style which is a bold move. The language is beautiful and words flow like a dream. Your thoughts are aptly described. Chapeau!
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Great piece. I really appreciate the free style, your own style which is a bold move. The language is beautiful and words flow like a dream. Your thoughts are aptly described. Chapeau!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
Comment from Sharon Davis
A very comprehensive perspective on the art of good writing, the process of writing well. Much has been said within this work, and the choice of a variety of literary devices, such as repetition, and lesser punctuation are effective in conveying your perspective. I very much enjoyed reading this work.
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A very comprehensive perspective on the art of good writing, the process of writing well. Much has been said within this work, and the choice of a variety of literary devices, such as repetition, and lesser punctuation are effective in conveying your perspective. I very much enjoyed reading this work.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
I found this one-of-a-kind poetry quite charming. I have to admit I learnt a few new words in the bargain. You have a way of telling your mind and simple philosophies of life. Thoroughly enjoyed. Thanks for sharing!
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I found this one-of-a-kind poetry quite charming. I have to admit I learnt a few new words in the bargain. You have a way of telling your mind and simple philosophies of life. Thoroughly enjoyed. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Write, Write is right! Writing keeps us young - forcing our brains to function, whether they want to or not! This was a great write with much to say and I enjoyed it thoroughly... good work, sir
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Write, Write is right! Writing keeps us young - forcing our brains to function, whether they want to or not! This was a great write with much to say and I enjoyed it thoroughly... good work, sir
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
Comment from Susan Newell
You have done an excellent job of expressing your personal philosophy regarding your responsibility as a writer whose words will stick around and continue to do their job. I can't say that I share all aspects of your philosophy, but that's what makes it good. It is more advice to yourself than to others. We need different perspectives, styles and philosophies. Good job.
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You have done an excellent job of expressing your personal philosophy regarding your responsibility as a writer whose words will stick around and continue to do their job. I can't say that I share all aspects of your philosophy, but that's what makes it good. It is more advice to yourself than to others. We need different perspectives, styles and philosophies. Good job.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
Comment from jake cosmos aller
i like this meta poem about writing and the process of writing. lots of meat on these poetic bones. I like the last stanzas the best.
Speak briefly, to the point, the truth honestly, actually, really, fairly, truly just
Address readers direct, straight, open, open-heart, honourably, positively, progressively and fast
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i like this meta poem about writing and the process of writing. lots of meat on these poetic bones. I like the last stanzas the best.
Speak briefly, to the point, the truth honestly, actually, really, fairly, truly just
Address readers direct, straight, open, open-heart, honourably, positively, progressively and fast
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
Comment from smileycloud
I think this is not only good for me to read but I , rightly or wrongly, found it quite amusing to me and interesting and full of great little explanations of writing/a writer, a determined poem with a strength of conviction
I am thinking outside the box when I think of this as a writer's eighteen commandments if they are truly dedicated and my imagination sees them on a "tablet of stone"
there
me and my imagination run wild
thanks for the intriguing poem
have a smiley day
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I think this is not only good for me to read but I , rightly or wrongly, found it quite amusing to me and interesting and full of great little explanations of writing/a writer, a determined poem with a strength of conviction
I am thinking outside the box when I think of this as a writer's eighteen commandments if they are truly dedicated and my imagination sees them on a "tablet of stone"
there
me and my imagination run wild
thanks for the intriguing poem
have a smiley day
Comment Written 03-Jun-2020
